Yeah, there's another version (but only of this chapter). Fully edited sfx, which is impressive: http://www.batoto.net/read/_/93837/touhou-omoito-doujinshi_v01_by_no-group
Who could have known that this manga, which started more as a comedic one, was going to become the first part of this series. One that would explore how would archiving a totally independent doll impact Alice from the point of a conscious Hourai. It's a shame there hasn't been anything like this since then (or at least I didn't find it).