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Music For Sarah 4 [English]

Western
Posted:2013-05-22 07:48
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Language:English  
File Size:2.20 MiB
Length:28 pages
Favorited:53 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.95

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Posted on 22 May 2013, 07:48 by:   grimest    PM
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testing hypnotic tunes!
Posted on 22 May 2013, 14:41 by:   dementio    PM
Score +15
Hm. Page 9 usually happens without the protagonist knowing until too late.

I think a lot of the typos in this could be caught with a standard English spell-check. On a related note, I did not realize that "copulate" was actually a word...

Keep up the good work, though! It's not a bad story at all.
Posted on 22 May 2013, 16:59 by:   Dimitro    PM
Score +13
Is it some kind of anime character maker you using?

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