Ah, the Internet. Raping my childhood and loving every minute of it.

Base +6, madprofessor +4, alonzo999 +7, ElZx +5

"You remember me to Scooby Doo in spring" One of many awesome quotes from this piece of work. I like the porn, but gods, the dialogue. Apparently handing this to anyone with even a decent grasp of the English language was impossible. Please, if you're even remotely unsure about your translation and English isn't even your third language, put it up somewhere for help, don't just post with atrocious grammar and spelling.

Base +8, ElZx +5