Editing by: vindictae
Translation: wr4st3r
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This one could need some Major cleanup

Page 4: You managed to mispell the word 'sign'
Some of the soundeffects you make footnotes for you EASILY could have edited in things (Page 11 for example) even then you're rather inconsistent in which you translate, which are untranslated and which are footnote translated.

A suggestion would to change your 'talking' font as apostrophes are very easily lost within words with t before them. An example of this can be seen on page 18 where the cases where you use "it's" looks very close to being "its" so maybe consider adding additional spacing if not change the font you use.

Also will you be doing the others in this series?

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been waiting for this one

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I died on page 9

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Page 9: Fukken Saved.

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DITTO, MUTHAFUCKER!

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Now you see why people name ditto "pimp".

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http://i42.tinypic.com/ztyae9.png

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*reads page 9*

*reads page 9 4 more times*

da fuk did i just read lol

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Seriously disturbing, wtf.

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