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[Sasamori Tomoe] Yuugure Toshoshitsu - Library of Dusk (COMIC Megastore H 2012-07) [English] [Fuhrer] [Digital]

[笹森トモエ] 夕暮れ図書室 (コミックメガストアH 2012年7月号) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2013-08-31 03:40
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Language:English  TR
File Size:13.29 MiB
Length:21 pages
Favorited:861 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.29

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Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:03 by:   hihohahi    PM
Score +486
feel like i'm reading google translation

but then again, ask someone to proofread if you are not native to english!
(thanks tho)
Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:11 by:   Kishi    PM
Score +376
You need an editor and proofreader. The translated sentences feel weird to native English speaker.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:16 by:   Light_Dragon    PM
Score +118
Agreed. You should have had this proofread. The grammar makes it painful to read.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:19 by:   alienine    PM
Score +120
The English translation is very awkward.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:20 by:   Fuhrer.Izmi    PM
Score +157
Thanks for comment. Next time I'll ask someone to edit.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:21 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +46
It's to bad because the art is nice, but man, what poor translation.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:25 by:   Z.G.    PM
Score -29
Thank you. Some errors, but at least we get a translation.
Improve yourself and it'll be ok. Don't be like... well ya know.

Edit: since the last Laruffi translation turn into war, I'm just saying thing here to translator
If someone have translated (if you can call it translation) it doesn't mean you don't have to translate it. It'll be, however, better since you'll get us a proper translation!
Posted on 31 August 2013, 04:41 by:   psicomenace    PM
Score -54
Thanks a lot for the translation, anyway to me the important part of this book is the art ;D
Posted on 31 August 2013, 05:05 by:   hacklol    PM
Score +20
sorry for the bad english, where were you when you where sexed?
i was at page 13 and the librarari girl said
"lets sex"
"no"
Posted on 31 August 2013, 05:16 by:   Mark Wahlberg    PM
Score -45
lol nice grammar plz trans moer
Posted on 31 August 2013, 05:24 by:   amuro_ray32    PM
Score +49
I agree with most of the comments. Translation is appreciated, but it felt very awkward to read. Someone who is a native English speaker should edit your future releases.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 06:39 by:   face1355    PM
Score +172
Perfect sense make this! Bizarro think art poor, but words are moving and eloquent for a hentai
Posted on 31 August 2013, 07:16 by:   neofranky    PM
Score +26
Duwang, is that you? I thought that by the end of part 4 you had at least decent grammar.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 16:07 by:   TaggingReader    PM
Score +41
I like how a first time translator is encouraged to improve his/her translations in this community. It's only when they release a half dozen with absolutely no sign of improvement that people start to hate on them and such.

Please improve your translations and we will continue to try to encourage you.

Here are a couple of things I'll point out, though I won't go through every page.
"I lend this" should probably be "I would like to borrow this" instead.
"Your face is red. I wonder if poor physical condition?" is awkward. Try more for something like "Your face is red. Are you sick?"
"Then the semen continues being squeezed every day" and "Incidentally such pathetic there is no won emperor..." are both extremely awkward sentences. While the first could be fixed relatively easily by a native speaker of English (something like "After that, she drained me of my semen every day" maybe?), the second one doesn't make much sense at all.
Posted on 31 August 2013, 18:42 by:   ncc1701z    PM
Score +35
please redo this when you've got a good editor. it felt like a google/bing translate machine.
Posted on 01 September 2013, 07:12 by:   SirFatCat    PM
Score +20
I'm gonna try and make a better edit since this one is terribly translated as well as edited. Should have it finished in a few days.
Posted on 02 September 2013, 03:07 by:   IosonoOtakuman    PM
Score +10
This is the Grammar Nazis' paradise.
Posted on 09 April 2014, 01:22 by:   Xavier Blitz    PM
Score +7
Uhm.
Almost as bad ad Laruffii or CGRascal.
I hope at least you will become better, because we have enough shitty translators.
Posted on 24 January 2015, 20:50 by:   KumagawaM    PM
Score +11
"Let's sex."

For a librarian, she sucks at speaking.
Posted on 18 December 2015, 21:36 by:   Zero_35    PM
Score +14
It's pretty ironic that... having sex within the library... while their english is.... this... terrible...
But 9/10 For Tiddies...
Posted on 28 August 2018, 07:15 by:   Forgunia    PM
Score +10
The translation kind of ruins it for me.
Posted on 07 September 2021, 14:16 by:   jfragrettel    PM
Score +8
Great job, great translation - thanks for sharing it with the community

waiting for new translations of other works by this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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