------------ Thai Original Story ------------
Illustrator&story by xter
Translated by Dragoonlord
Typesetter&Cleaner : DiaryDoll

Without Text Version ( For Translator )
https://mega.co.nz/#!WcBAmRgI!aomAqWlswZq-dmfkwBo59Q2rE_lw-uAojWjQXuneCpU

Oh...I feel so sleepy and tired.
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That was quick, thanks. READ FROM LEFT TO RIGHT since it was originally Thai. As long as you can understand it, who care about proofread. It is harder to tranlate from Thai because it is not common for stuffs on this site to be in Thai originally.

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This isn't a half bad story you've brought out, Doll. The story is simple but touching, art is well done and erotic, and the decensoring job is great too. My only complaint would be that the sentences don't sound right when spoken. This is usually the case when a work is translated straight from one language to another. You can avoid this by getting a proofreader to check the work before sending it out to make sure the English sentences make logical sense. All in all, great job with this, guys. Just work on getting a proofreader, and I think you all will be in business.

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What, Thailand do censorship to comics too?

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The sentences doesn't make sense.

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Sorry for some sentences which don't make sense. Well, I don't want to make a poor excuse like translating from Thai to English is hard or anything. My English skill is at fault, especially at translating to the communicating level. I agree that mine is bad but yeah, I'm trying to improve it.

Also, I'm looking for a proofreader. However, my free time is not that calculable so I'm not sure when is the time for my new work.

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Suea = Tiger (Mr.Tiger)

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Not the best translation I've ever read but the most excellent choice in source material more than makes up for that in spades, Kudos to you DiaryDoll.

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This is Thai's doujin? I'm Thai but I never know this lol.
Sorry about my bad english.

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Thai RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/636337/3389853bd3/

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Have someone to promise to protect is the best thing in the life

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