a W.I.T.C.H comic by Palcomix.

This comic was a great experience, as I said in the other gallery we left so many ideas out of this comic due the size of the project, probably it'd be better to separate this comic in two parts but anyway one thing that I love about the ending is that we left the idea of other girls being trapped in the mountain so this particuplar event was pretty much a part of a much bigger thing.

This idea for this comic came from the middle ages, there're some manuscripts showing demons dragging souls to hell and that idea stuck into my mind for a long time, the Fantasia short was another important part of this idea many things can happen in one night; for the minotaur scene is mostly based on the Theseus myth, according to that story every year a ship full of girls and boys was sent to the Minotaur, Hay Lin's scene was pretty easy it's mostly based on tentacles as a stample of asian porn.

For Cornelia that scene is actually taken from two really old hentai animes, Venus 5 and Twin Angels were the small demons were mostly used at the begining of the sex scenes, for Taranee is a scene from another old anime called Cool Devices (Can't remember the episode number but the name is "Seek")

And yes we didn't use Chernabog properly, one of the ideas is to make an alternative ending for this comic so maybe we can dump everything there, honestly I was surprised about peple asking for a bad ending anyway wait for the next comic wich is a Sailor Moon Anthology and after that another one based on the manga/anime Candy Candy.

@neregate555 and HentaiLad
It's the biggest case of false advertising since the "Never Ending Story" :) but yeah the ending was rushed mostly because the comic was getting bigger and bigger. This could easily be a 100+ pages monster, but one thing about that is that most people lost interest in longer projects, we did a survey about this and the standard for porn comics ended up being 30-40 pages. But yeah an alternative ending is already in the works, it'd be a great way to add many elements that were left out I can relate of the ending being dull, it's one of the many lessons for upcoming projects.

@volkodav
Patiente my fellow friend, patiente.

@muffinfucker
Thanks, wish more people act this way. I got a few messages on DA and e-mail about people that got annoyed by the process; with most japanese mangas and dojins lenght is not a problem because those are published when they're completed, but when you have a few pages posted every week some people get upset about it.

@Muramasa616
Thank you, I actually didn't realize the problem until the comic was published, the main issue was that the story was getting bigger and bigger, even got a couple of mails of people angry about the slow progress in this story, as you said I should probably cut the stories into different chapters. Right now I'm working in an alternative ending so I can put everything that was left, but before I have a couple of comics that I have, about the cancelled projects, the reason was quite simple I tried to do them by myself and turn out I'm not a good artist so that's the reason of why I decided to go with Palcomix. See Ya !!!

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You made this comic and yet you were surprised by a demand for a bad ending? Really? Anyway not a bad comic.

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Of course people wanted a bad ending. The title is Enslaved Guardians for crying out loud! Who reads that hoping everyone gets out okay. In fact the title is kinda lying since the gaurdians aren't even close to enslaved. This Comic was a real dissapointment not just because it lacked a bad ending but because it's good ending was rather dull. They escape rather easily and mostly just shake off the whole experience.

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Boo!!! Me want to see them getting raped into submission by the Overlord, not this happy ending shit.

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I for one would read 100 pages of these girls getting fucked slowly into mind break submission

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As has been frequently mentioned above, not a huge fan of the ending. Bad or not, it was very obviously rushed but I can understand why you did it. Hopefully there will be a return later though. In terms of actual content, very happy with what I saw, quite liked the transitions with Will. Some good ideas as well but this probably would've been better as series of shorter comics. I'm never sure why you release things how you do, I for one don't even glance at your works anymore unless there's some indication of them being completed, especially since a couple I was following got canceled. To conclude though, good work and hopefully the start of a great series.

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did not knew you were the commissioner ,if you want i can delete the gallery and let you repost it.

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Rafasilva.

First of all I want to thank you for creating this comic. The W.I.T.C.H characters are amongst my favorite characters coming from Disney and the story is already fun.

This work of yours was amazing but like some I was a bit dissappointed that there was a happy ending but you've already said (in few words) that there will be either a sequel or an alternative ending.

I did have a question about the timeline, however and I didn't get it answered last time but perhaps you've just missed it. How old are the girls here.

And maybe a stupid question but is there any of the girls that actually 'liked' (secretly) what happened.

I just think this is great stuff and I'd LOVE to see more.

Furthermore I think you're selling yourself a bit short. You ARE a good artist.

Keep up the good work and hoping to see more of you soon.

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The bad ending that everyone wanted can be found here:- https://e-hentai.org/g/787483/d0f9938f12/. Good comic by the way!!!

Last edited on 18 February 2015, 02:06.

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