Props to the artist for drawing a decent-looking human male. That one in the Nanoha doujin was just... *shudders*

Would like to know what the hell's going on with Fate. He might've jumped the gun at the start, but going into battle mode's a LITTLE excessive, Fate-chan.

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Is that guy Chrono?

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the cover looks very ntrish

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I'll agree with R.D. I was afraid we'll get another fat abomination. How glad I am that I was proven wrong. This is really delicious.

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@R.D. :
I believe he says something along the lines of wanting Fate to wash him with her body like in a soapland. Then she goes berserk because how dare he go to that kind of place when he's got a wife with such a killer body ! ... or something. He apologizes saying he never actually went to one and he saw it in some AV.

In short : Feito-chan is the perfect waifu, but you'd better not anger her. Or her BFF, for that matter.

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Okay, I mis-read the Kanji, what it was is that the male asked Fate to use her body to soap him up and she snapped. She mellowed out instantly though.

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About damn time that this artist made an doujin that isn't gang bang, or ugly face old geezer. Now if he could do an Nanoha doujin same as this it'll be complete.

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Excellent and hot! Tho it really is a shame that there are not enough vanilla hetero themed hentai Nanoha doujins out there, or at the very least translated ones.

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There's a missing page in this gallery, either pg.7 or pg.8, not sure which.

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