ALL CREDIT for the translation goes for the original team/person who translate this one originally.

I re-edited this one using the EXACT SAME translation of: https://e-hentai.org/g/243220/e104678fd2/

RAW used is here: https://e-hentai.org/g/279389/bdfa1ae764/

Much appreciated.

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I swear this how it happened in the t.v. series.

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@PaladianCecil234: If that was how it happened in the TV series, then it wouldn't have ended the way it did.

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Normally I'm not a huge Bakuretsu Fuusen fan due to how the mangaka blows out the proportions of ordinarily petite characters. However I really liked this one, especially since it ended with Asuka being all Butthurt.

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His doujins don't follow any particular order, right? Because i've seen Doujins from him where Shinji has sex for the first time with Misato, and then one with Asuka which seemed to be the sequel, so i thought the storys were maybe connected. But they were from 2012, this one is 2010, so it doesn't add up

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If only this were canon. Then none of the crazy crap would have happened.

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