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잘 봐주셨스면 합니다.

첫 작품이라니 축하드립니다~

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제목에 작품 이름과 함께 작가 이름과 언어를 영어로 쓰시고 부제목란에 일본어로 그것들을 써놓으시면 별점이 좀 올라갈 겁니다.

제목을 본래 틀을 벗어나서 써놓으면 미국애들 별점 겁나게 짜게 매기더라고요...

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2칸 뒤쯤에 다른 분이 상당수 번역해둔게 있는데 ㅠㅠ 아쉽네요. 첫 작품이시라 고생하셨을거 같아요. 힘내세요.

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I like the character design a lot. I also like the first half of the story...but the second half of the story..not so much (I kind of have a distaste for group...also a distaste for easy-girls if that is applicable here, which it kind of seems (I saw the first chapter and the two non-dark-skinned girls for some reason got involved in festival that got them possesed by spirits and gangbanged (which I dislike) and when they found out about what they did afterwards, they were crying, which was pretty sad...and I guess as a result of that, the tomboy-girl turns into a slut over time...possibly do to influence of the eveil spirit that posseses her latter...).

Edit: Ohh, all of the chapters are in Cultural Anthropology...I got it now. So she wanted to see something that even the small guy hasn't seen, but that "festival" is only for men, so she tried to disguise her self as a man and then...either it's that they were found out or that the ritual is that guys are made to drink semen (I hope not; but in chapter 4 they are definately found out and put in the girl-pen, so it might be the latter)

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이거 뒤에 더 페이지가 많은걸로 아는데 여기서 끝인가요???

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에피2를 아무도 안올리네요

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잘봤습니다. 누가 풀버전 올리면좋겠네요

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If you wish to support Shindol's awesome art,here's the link to his Patreon page.
https://www.patreon.com/shindol?ty=h

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