THIS IS INCOMPLETE. Someone messaged me on the forums about it, so I may as well post what I have now.

I only finished the first half. I underestimated how much redrawing I needed to do, and I didn't want to put ugly big white blocks over the art. And I don't want to spend more than an hour or two each day doing this during this time of the year.

Some of the redrawings I've done are bad and some are good. Luckily, there's very little redrawing that I have to do for the 2nd last half.

Also, question:

1) should I change the names of the girls to their "real" names? The girls are based on other anime/game characters, but their names have been changed.

Nana = Nene from loveplus
Rika (blonde girl) = ???
Suzumiya Haruka = Suzumiya Haruhi
Satoyama Miyo = Akiyama Mio
Kirihara Akiha = Kirigaya Suguha

2) should I cut the pages in half? Some of the pages can be cut in half into single pages.

Edit:forgot to add pg35

Thanx....was waiting for the translation....well i dont think anyone would care abt the names are real or not...and i think u should cut the pages that can be cut...anyways thanx for this one.

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1. If it is based on other characters, let it remain so. The artist changed their names because while the inspiration(or even blatant copying) is taken from those characters, the fact remains that these characters that are drawn by the artist are not direct portrayals of the actual characters in question. Also generally, accuracy is pretty important and it isn't very nice to know that someone "fixed" your work when you didn't intend for it to be "fixed".

2. This probably comes down to a matter of preference, but I would say that whatever you get in its original form should stay in its original form.

tl;dr : Don't change stuff.

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Thanks for the translation and as to your questions:

1) Keep their name the same for whatever the CG set call them. You can always include a page at the end with who the girls are in their respected anime/game

2) It would be good if you could cut the pages into singles pages where possible.

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Thank you for picking up this project.

For your question:

1. Prefer the original character's name, since its obvious the doujinshi creator want to use that characters, just put the parody name to avoid lawsuit or something. Since we are in e-hentai, and not profiting anything, it shouldn't be a problem. Using the original name will be a better move.

2. Cut the page for the one that can be separated into different page, it will make easier for the reader to read.

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1. Keep the fake names.

2. Preferably yes.

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Much Ntr's Many feels Such sadness

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A depressing ntr Christmas gift, just what I needed!!!!

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I noticed a page is missing from the raws between 34 and 35
https://e-hentai.org/s/d2cb38801f/563983-35

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@GuroLover12 Lol, no matter how depressing it maybe, we can be happy in the knowledge that there are people reading the same thing and being depress as fellow brothers in arms.

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Rika (blonde girl) = Kousaka Kirino (Oreimo)

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And with that I am moving to Japan. Where women are easy and sexual crimes(especially against minors) is A-ok.

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