Why would anyone want to combine an actually decent translation with Laruffi's is beyond me.

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Better criticism would be pointing out incorrect grammar. Of course, actually editing and submitting a better version would be, better.

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I'd happily do quality control for you, Laruffi.

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agree i mean larufii's work remastered

in my opinion i would say thanks to larufii for brought up the incest mom and son + pregnancy manga to translation
(better than no one wants to do it)

so why dont we start to do quality control and combined translation?

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A very nice story and the moms are drawn to be so voluptuous. We sure need more manga like this one. The mind break tag was missing here so I'll be the first one to add this tag then.

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there are some pages missing !
And some aren't in the right order!

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I don't see why this is 4.5 stars and the other gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/796701/38f60c5465/ is 1.4 both are using aceonetwo+Laruffii translation so why is this one highly rated?
Edit: The decensor also looks fine to me so why? the pages are identical apart from the tiny censorship.

Last edited on 22 June 2015, 21:25.

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