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(SC41) [Hatomugi x Genmai (Harurun)] Toki o Wasurete... | Forgotten Time [English] [SMDC]

(サンクリ41) [はとむぎ×げんまい (はるるん)] 時を忘れて… [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2014-01-02 18:37
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:10.34 MiB
Length:12 pages
Favorited:130 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.15

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Posted on 02 January 2014, 18:37 by:   shadow_moon    PM
Uploader Comment
Translated and edited by myself.

For DDL check: http://wp.me/p3Iacc-fS
Posted on 02 January 2014, 20:31 by:   tkhang    PM
Score +45
This would be very good, if it has a longer story. Overall, it color and picture is very well done. So thank you very much SMDC translation.
Posted on 02 January 2014, 22:27 by:   Shitsuji-kun    PM
Score +64
The script probably would have benefited from having another pair of eyes look over it. There are a few instances where the language felt jumbled and awkward:

>It would be better that I didn't came... -> It would've been better if I didn't come...
>You want to have sex with, right? -> You want to have sex with me, right?

Just some friendly advice.

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