scanned by saber.anime, courtesy of www.thetsukuyomiproject.com

Just some constructive criticism, the colors here look a little bit too dark to me. Some details in the darker portions are lost, compared to the other scan (noticeable in their hair https://e-hentai.org/s/0bb2c1f034/666945-9 vs https://e-hentai.org/s/785cf9568d/637298-8).

It's a minor point, but I thought I would share my opinion. Still a very good scan. Thanks!

Base +13, wawa1411 +7

Comparing the 2 scans, I found this version to be closer to real tanned girls, personally.
Some may like it brighter, but this skin tone matches perfectly with the red hair color.
Just for me though.
Thanks for your version, ramenface.

Base +20

alt scan https://e-hentai.org/g/637298/4de64948b9/

per https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&showtopic=36923&view=findpost&p=3337318 , while the 2nd [THIS] is better overall, some might prefer the 1st's color profile, and 2nd has some distasteful scanlines.

If you want to see this TLed, support the bounty at https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=18300

and done https://e-hentai.org/g/1327628/8e23587d2f/

Last edited on 11 December 2018, 16:01.

Base +49