I kind of did a double take while reading this, not because of the scenario, but because the art style just seems so... wrong.
And upon checking My Kirintei file I can definitely say that this doujin lacks the spit and polish of most of his/her other works, not that it's bad it was just a surprise.
>Hazard No problem. Glad it is liked. I feel bad about page 8 though; i was planning to go back and try to edit that more but in the end i forgot about it. E-hentai's system does not allow replacement of pages so i guess that's how its stays. The fixed version is on my blog(yakudou.com) if it bothers someone enough.