When I saw: Hinase Aya's Seigi ga Iro ni Nomareta Hi, I was entranced by the art and wanted to know the story. So I took it upon myself to attempt my first manga translation of the chapter I liked the most, I hardly speak any Japanese and can't read any Kanji so I had to machine translate through four different translation programs. I was quite an arduous process and took a long time, in some cases I couldn't fathom out what was being said so I left it as close to the translation as possible. If anybody thinks I'm wrong and they could do better, please feel free to add your text over mine and reupload.

raw https://e-hentai.org/s/2cdd4458bf/668302-44

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Your English is fine. Your font and typesetting could be better though. SaHa would be a good example:
https://e-hentai.org/g/654346/3423e1bdad/

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So much potential, but far too short. If only this story had 2 more chapters or so...

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Thanks for posting and being up-front with the quality. I know there are certainly some translators here *cough* goatse *cough* who do about the same level of quality and expect people to accept it as a fully translated work. If you're wanting to get into more translating, I certainly wish you luck, as we could all use a little more translated porn.

I'm certainly not qualified to judge, but I give it an A for effort.

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Honesty. I like it.

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>machine translate through four different translation programs
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

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>Aoi, a female member of the Justice Rangers, has been captured by the evil organization Diablos .
>Her uterus has been completely tormented, and she is drowning in carnal pleasure...

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