My first 3d comic. It's an experiment with a futa character. This is something I'm not making money with, I've used models and textures from other creators, most of them are free to use. I composed the scene, worked with the light, rendering settings, wrote the (poor) storyline. I repeat myself, it's an experiment, hope someone will enjoy this.

I'm curious to hear any kind of feed back, if you like this, let me know! I will continue as soon as I can.

-KILLEDbyBILLS

P.s. I like to do 3d art as a hobby, it's not my job, so it's low quality and i know. English it's not my native language, so any correction on the text it's welcome.

The very first thing I have to comment on are your eyes. I'm a 3D artist, as well, and I would kill to have the same settings you use for your eyes. Any chance we could swap notes?

Hit me up on my site, www.3dwickedworks.com ! At this writing, the site is still under construction, but we have a shout box!

Other than that, I'm definitely looking forward to your future works! Keep up the good work!

Base +7, kieyzo -5

While not exactly my cup of tea, it does look alright for a first attempt. Looking forward to future comics :).

Base +1, flamedance58 +7

You should add close up scenes of the actual penetration.

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This was great. Think we'll see a diphallic futa in the future?

Base +6, Sephious +6

I like it. You should get rid of the condom though, if possible.

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@MARMIST
Thanks for being honest! I know condoms it's strange in this kind of stuff, I just thought that could be something different! (I was curious to try that 3d model out, to be honest). And for creampie as @chaos-x already pointed out, it's true, but I like to do things that I'm good and right now something like that would be really awful to see and fake looking. About male/female work: I like to do different stuff work with different characters and stories... No need to stuck to just one fantasy! =)

P.s. In the future I'll give your suggestion a try, maybe I'll post that here if turns out good!

Base +3, gath875 +7

RenderAddict. this comic is really good but there are 2 things that HAVE to be changed :

1) no condoms. Condoms are for real life this is NOT real life. We ALL want pussy creampies here. In real life too but there we cannot. There is no need for you to remind us.

2) PUSSY CREAMPIE. with overflowing. and it must be pushed all in during the climax, possibly with a single page dedicated to the climax itself.

Ps : no need for "normal" male/female. Futa on female will do just fine. There are already too many "normals" around.

Also if you fancy some straight_shota on milf that would be awesome too.

Base +5, Sephious +6

I really like this! Only comment is that speech bubbles should have a pointer to the speaker. Different colors help but not as much as the pointer would. Great job, thanks! I love muscles and futa, so this was a great find for me.

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Good work, well done! Hope there will be more. Futa and muslce is always awesome. Maybe even some dick or muscle growth, like infected futa semen. ;-D

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I think that only posing models is worthless. Comics that cheaply use others' works just look like bootlegs to me. And I'm not really into bootlegs. I recommend studying some anatomy and modeling some characters yourself. It's embarrassing how many people use DAZ software, and wrong for that matter.

As for the writing, it feels as though these characters are really ambiguous. Who are they? Why are they there? They should dress according to their personalities. The main character's wardrobe doesn't fit her at all. She's obviously reserved as well as abrasive, so why would she be wearing her blouse tied like that? She's annoyed that she's treated like a low-class whore, so the answer is 'she wouldn't.'

Her ponytail defies gravity, the lighting is far too dim and causes creepy-looking shadows, as well as making for a really shitty, unkempt locker room. Every locker room I've seen anywhere has flourescent, consistent lighting.

I love musclefuta and this is a far cry from how it should be, especially since you're using someone else's materials.

Don't be a bootleg. Think with your own brain, man. Think about what makes a story work. Not necessarily a compelling saga, but what details make an atmosphere both attractive and somewhat realistic.

That's my schpeal. People might not like it because it contradicts the man making the butts touch, but I make butts that touch as well as actually making them touch so my opinion's at least a little bit worth thinking about.

Base +7, chase.trans -5

More Please

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