Scans credited by TsuKuYoMi (thetsukuyomiproject.com)

I don't have enough free time today, so I'll finish and upload the rest later.

I was initially just going to translate and edit a page or two to try my luck at vertical text-bubbles (which this particular doujinshi applies ever so graciously), but I couldn't stop once I started. (^-^;)

I've been translating for many years (some of you who have been around longer than others have probably downloaded some popular anime titles via KaZaA back in the day that I've worked on), but this is my first time also doing the editing (scanlation-wise). I'm going for a minimalist approach here so as to not take away too much from the actual art, but if anyone has any positive feedback to leave for me, feel free to do so in the comments section.

Edit:

You know what? I'm done. I'm tired of trolls down-voting my comments on my own galleries into oblivion. If you all don't want me to translate this so much that you'll down-vote my own comments on my own galleries, then go wait for someone else to do it for you.

You can criticize all you want, but when you take away my freedom of speech concerning my own work, we have a problem.

Feel free to send your thanks for saving you from my translation to the following users:

GuroLover12, derpderp2, Ragnageir, kusanagi177, JamesCID, crazymagic, ichirohiroku

Not exactly positive, because... I'm sorry but the edit is plain horrible.
For starters, vertical alignment, you sure?!

Look at other peoples edits for reference, read some guides, join a group, make an editing bounty, etc....
There are really a bunch of ways to go about it. But I'm simply too tired to give any more specific advice right now, sorry.
Edit: A lot of people are doing this for free (including me), so that's not really much of an argument.
And vertical alignment simply doesn't work in english. It's hard to read and looks plain horrible. Really, just look around.

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You know what? I'm done. I'm tired of trolls down-voting my comments on my own galleries into oblivion. If you all don't want me to translate this so much that you'll down-vote my own comments on my own galleries, then go wait for someone else to do it for you.

You can criticize all you want, but when you take away my freedom of speech concerning my own work, we have problem.

Feel free to send your thanks for saving you from my translation to the following users:

GuroLover12, derpderp2, Ragnageir, kusanagi177, JamesCID, crazymagic, ichirohiroku

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There's more than a couple doujin from this same author on here, already translated by multiple groups/people. You could have a look at those to see how they've handled the elongated speech bubbles, but as a tip, vertically aligned comic sans is not really the way to go.

https://e-hentai.org/g/659908/a954df6011/

https://e-hentai.org/g/617018/17c8f8aaae/

https://e-hentai.org/g/589535/f279e70bcc/

If you don't wanna bother with the edit, you can always ask for help on the forums— I bet you'll find someone willing to do it in a heartbeat. If you don't wanna even ask, then don't, it's your choice, but what you've got so far is pretty damn shitty.

(While you're at it: level the images, and save them as 32 colors PNG files. Or, again, get an editor to do it for you.)

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there's a lot of fonts that you can use that aren't comic sans imo

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@RtS
check out https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=68725
the typesetting guides are pretty good

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Doing something for free doesn't render you immune to criticism. If you're going to do it, do it right, or be willing to learn how to do it right. Otherwise you're just wasting your own time.

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Vertical alignment, comic sans and to top it all - drama over criticism. That's pretty bad.

On the other hand, if you teamed up with CGRascal, you could actually do some quality work! His editing skills (because his TL barely qualifies as English) and your TL (because you can't edit for shit) would fit together.

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all right first thing you need to understand is that all criticize doesn't mean to revile you but advice you to do some properly i know the feeling that what you thinking 'cause i use to be like you before but if you too sensitive that can't take the comment then don't do this

ps.you translate it easier to understand good job

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@RtS
>freedom of speech
Reminder that freedom of speech is a two way street.
You have as much of a right to say something as I have the right to criticize.

Getting this asspained over some criticism is also childish.

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Imagine that, people criticizing each other over the internet... what is the world coming to! :/

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I see the Laruffi bots are out in force today.

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cg rascals student

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Really? you couldn't be bothered to upload, like, ten more pages?

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Dude, why don't you outsource editing to someone in the Cove, we have plenty of editors willing to work with a translator? And then you can focus on translating, which is the usual bottleneck (we have more editors than translators).

Also, how can you be an Internet veteran and not get used to dramu? :>

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Please do not post or upload work if you are unable to take criticism. And especially don't do it when you can't tell the difference between criticism and trolling.

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Take your time, I can wait for the rest of the pages :) Yuushibu is my favorite anime and see a part translated doujinshi is a great finding. I will look foward for the rest of the pages.

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You could have waited for him to finish the translation but no, you had to nitpick the editing.

Thank you guys, now this story will never meet ira end.

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