That was a very well done "forced male to female sex change" scenario. My only gripe is that there was too much time spent on the men, which was probably an unavoidable necessity to tell the story. I just find men unappealing, I tend to tolerate their presence in stories if they're with attractive women. Most of the scenes with the men in this story only featured them alongside a machine; which, in and of itself, does nothing for me. The generic CGI artwork is the weakest link here, but at least the women are all relatively attractive. That aside, its not bad. The story has a bit of expansion potential, too.

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