Original is here: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=3795485

With thanks to 麒麟氏樣 and co. for their translation.

I never understood why all the more serious and touching doujins of this and Touhou always pull the "Oh, it was a movie all along!" end. Regardless, it was a nice read. Thanks to whoever is translating all the non-H Kancolle doujins.

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That was the first movie ending I've read... I liked it!

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what a masterpiece fuck im sad

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This was just so beautiful... also adding the credits and bloopers was a nice idea. That way readers wont get too depressed.. Still didnt stop the tears though

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that scene with maya in the sea really got me....

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@Flare77: I know right?

Im not crying. There's just... stuff in the my eye.

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@towyen
Well done!

Hmm.. Yet some suggestions (or opinions more likely, wish I won't offend anyone through)

1) p39 needs a little fix: "That doesn't quite suit you" should be "Doesn't that quite you?" or sth like that.
(Forgive me limited English vocabulary if that is not pure.)
The original meaning of sentence is that hair band suits Shinarai.

2) p83 the last Q＆A between Ooi and Kitakami.

Well, really tough one.
For the original sentence doesn't suggest clearly what Ooi and Kitakami are referring: (yes, neither of them)
In one word: Ambiguous

In Ooi's case, the origin question swing between "a) Is Abukuma good?" and "b) *asking for a respond"
In Kitakami's case: a) Direct respond (“Yes she is”) b) *Consolation (“Yes”)

PS: Personally I would say first conversation is a) and the latter one is b)
PSV: There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. (Forgive me)


3) p153 Like 1), What Junyou says is Tenryuu doesn't fit Maya's Clothes surprisingly

Salute to you translators！
And Glory to the C button! (author)

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Wtf did I just read? I'm crying now... ;_;

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thanks for at least not ending it in a dark way,

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What the ****? This work is so ******* beautiful, simply amazing. I´m touched to my core, as a human being I can´t even start to describe how much the emotions resonated throughout the whole read. The author is master craftsman.

And of course, sincere gratitude for the wonderful translation.

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p41 escalated quickly like what a fuck, i didnt see that one coming.

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It was just a movie all along? I'm happy none of the ship-girls really died, but give me back my feels...

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This has to be one of my favorite manga to read on this site, the level of quality and subtly is truly breathtaking at times. However one thing I dont like is the movie ending. Personally it feels it robs a level of immersion that the story had built up to that point. Another thing is the fourth wall breaks, the comedic relief with these seem to come up at really juxtaposed times. While I understand im probably the minority on that I still give this a 8/10 rating, I deeply enjoyed the ride despite that.

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