A project, commission of Ashessup, who wanted a bad end in the Love Doll universe, Asdfguy3 helped me this time to correct my writing in English, I have being experimenting a little with the audio-visual experience, so now I suggest music to go with the comic, it’s totally optional, and I know that, coping and pasting here and there sounds kind of annoying so, just do it if you think you can trust my musical taste, please read the last message in the end, it’s kind of important, with all this said, here is the suggested music:
(1)Page 1-7: listenonrepeat.com/watch?v=FkI7NbAe1QI
(2) Page 8-18: http://listenonrepeat.com/watch/?v=X_zqdnl09VI
(3) Page 19-29: listenonrepeat.com/watch?v=quTWK5rufx8
(4) Page 30-53: listenonrepeat.com/watch?v=WVE90vGS9ps
(5) Page 54-65: http://listenonrepeat.com/watch/?v=do5TgLYJl6A
(6) Page 66-70: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_XCyjVJ-Ngw

Well The two biggest reasons the english versions don't get many comments are that the spanish versions come out so much earlier that anyone excited enough to comment will do so on the spanish version when it is released, And the fact that the English speaking Hypnofetish community which would normally be your largest comment base largely avoid E-hentai since many of its works appear here pirated from their original source. This series showed no indication that the person posting it here had any affiliation with either the Author or the translator so i'm sure many members of the Hypnosis community assumed this work was also pirated as well.

Base +8, Doomlight +6, errata +6, Fire558 +7, grimest -8

If your looking for feedback to from us it more a mix community from furrys, hypnosis, ect. to many people don't really leave much feedback about we kinda tell the person if they might of misspell something or it didn't make any sense to them. You did a great job in the english speaking but you cant away assume alot people will comment about thing alot it not like a popular site like deviantart is or other sites out there stumble upon this site looking for some doujin. When I comment about things it more on some of people trolling about with some of doujin that might have a huge censored bar that is half the page size,some publisher want money putting up a censored version of it and publishing there site on here, or even someone not knowing what the artist about and putting false tags so that could get more views seen alot and it not very welcome to here we try to keep it more mutual understanding.

Base +6, grimest -8

"Daughter" Alice's eyes look a bit odd in the first chapter. As if they're sunken in or have fatigue circles. Is this intentional, given she was just reprogrammed and abused?

Although this is a non-canon story, there's actually some character study here. Martha's flashback really helps to clarify her character and actually make her more sympathetic. It also highlights the dystopian nature of the world.

Poor, poor Sofia… Her re-introduction on page 40 depicts her as playful and quirky. And even a little embarrassed about the incomplete bunny suit. James really has helped her rediscover herself. Her fate in the BAD END is fascinating and disturbing. Unlike Alice, Sofia seems to have retained just a little bit of herself, but her relationship has been warped into one of sexual addiction and manipulation. I think i would have preferred to have seen more of her struggle as she's brainwashed; ruminating about who she was going to become, whether she'll actually experience happiness or simply "think" she's happy, etc. What happened to James was a little unclear here. It seems he's been drugged or "slightly" brainwashed, at least at first. The final interactions imply Sofia and the twins have been raping him non-stop, but also carefully and systematically "breaking" him into sensual slavery.

And Alice, or rather Lilith… Oh she is hot! Everything about her is just so deliciously wrong. She's shameless, sadistic, and sinfully fascinating whenever she speaks. Be it when she's plotting, betraying her friends, or gloating over her success. She's a cruel and sexy monster! It's kind of a shame I won't see more of her. (I'd even translate the Spanish line-by-line if she has another appearance.) At the same time, I'm REALLY glad this is a non-canon story. I love these characters. The BAD END is a sexy fantasy, but I'd hate for them to meet their end this way. Umm… That's all I have to say for now. I might give more comments later.

Base +2, grimest +5, Halfbeard +2

Is it bad I liked the Bad Ending way more than the actual ending?

Base +6, grimest +8, KingKamina +6, Ambipend +6, Halfbeard +2, PsychoMinkbreaker +4