This is my first post and first attempt at translating and typesetting, so please be nice >_<

tl;dl
Suwako: OK i'm done with this shit…
Kanako: Meet our little sanae!
Suwako: Fuuuuuuu——

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Page 47: I don't think that's ten years if Sanae looks like that and drinks ^^

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The text bubble said something like "十数年後", which would probably be translated more as 10 (or so) years later, my bad.
I believe the last two pages take place after kaminare, where Sanae becomes a God, so I guess that combined with the whole Gensokyo age thing means its kind of vague anyways ._.

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This was pretty damn good for a first attempt and thank you for your hard work.

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The art in this was great, and the translation flowed really well. I never would have guessed this was your first attempt.
Thanks for translating this! I hope to see more from you some day.

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Thanks for the translation !

Though, I noticed a couple of things :
- what's the deal with not cleaning the japanese text in some bubbles (pg 13, pg 29, pg 30, pg 32 and others...) ? It's not like it needed redrawing.
- nitpicking : pg 21, the sound effect is "shawa", not "shana"
- pg 30 : you wrote "Sanae" twice on the paper, instead of "Kochiya" and "Sanae"

Just some small details, but I thought I'd let you know.

Edit : people post fixes on ehentai all the time, so it's certainly possible to edit your gallery. I don't know much about the details, though. :/ Check the wiki on "Updating" : http://ehwiki.org/wiki/Making_Galleries

Last edited on 10 September 2014, 07:38.

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Yeah, a lot of those issues I caught when I finally had posted the thing (in particular, the Sanae Sanae thing); do you know if its possible to remove/edit pages on ehentai?
In regards to the Japanese remaining, I kind of worked on this at like, 2 am over multiple nights, I left some of the Japanese there because half-asleep me liked the kanji font x_x

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The moral of the story? Babies burn down villages.

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It takes a whole village...
Thank you for uploading. This artist always does fantastic touhou stories.

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nice, one more yakumi sarai translated. thanks for sharing.

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Last Page: No one can escape the existentialism, not even gods.

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