This is the first time I'll say, "Context (proper translation) would probably get this one pretty damn hard up for this." So what if having a chat during a series of blowjobs is illogical? Something tells me there's text there because it's worth it.
Also a little infuriating because I recognize the characters for the title, but can't quite remember what some of them are.
Shi-ya-fu-tsu-te Sa-ya-ka... alright, nevermind, I do recognize them, but now what...
Which is where I disagree with you, obviously, since I can't actually read it it's like a GD mystery. I'm not expecting poetry or a side-monologue at the level of a sports commentator, even if it's half just lewd sfx it still adds to the experience.
Also not knowing what I'm reading makes me feel like an illiterate, and Laruffi already has bad rewrites down, so I'd still appreciate the fuck out of it being done, and done right.
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