From Comic Erochari 2011-06

noob translate and edit by me

EDIT: fixed the font as best as I could, any feedback is welcome

Nice but, fix that font man.

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Anti alias that font.

Edit: Thank you, looks much better.

Last edited on 26 September 2014, 19:37.

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I love Yuzuki N's works, so more of their stuff is always appreciated, still you should have checked the fonts that other prominent translators use as a point of reference.

@ uploader, Ah, that did not occur to me. But when comparing it to the first version, this one looks much nicer. Kudos for giving a shit about your work.

Last edited on 30 September 2014, 05:00.

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Is that a continuation of something?

Also at TL: Please get a proofreader and a good editor, even though I'm happy to see something translated, it looks like shit, sorry to be blunt, but I rather like to be blunt to get the correct and unmistakable message across.

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@Hezard
It's not so much as the font itself but the software I used to edit, I was very aware of how pixelated it looked

@Battousai124
It's ok, it was really bad.. I hope it looks better now though, oh and as far as I know it's just a oneshot from some sort of "charity" tankoubon

@Dammon
Ok, thanks, I'll do that in my next one.. if it even happens lol

Last edited on 26 September 2014, 13:25.

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You should have the text centered rather than left aligned.

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She says "childhood friend" not sister, so no sister and no incest tags...

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I don't get why this ended being tagged as doujinshi when it's not a parody of anything...

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