My 2nd translation work, feedback much appreciated!

Msg me if you would like something translated!
If I find it interesting I may translate it.

Alright!! This look fantastic thank you soo much @klownboy

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The shotacon tag doesn't belong here. Her son seems grown enough to have a job if his last line is any indication, not to mention he is the same height as her.

Edit: The deed is done.
Edit 2: OK, you should really cut back on the re-uploading thing. Fixing things is fine, but so many re-ups in so short a time could give people a poor impression of you.

Last edited on 11 October 2014, 08:03.

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why is it that the ones with the terrible art have such good stories? very intense and sincere

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I would very much recommend using a spell checker. There seems to be at least one mistake per page.

@klownboy: I was exaggerating somewhat, but I'd only looked quickly at 4 random pages at the time (3 of which had errors).

Other things to note for future edits... English does not support vertical text very well. It's very difficult to read at times. There are a few instances where this appears and should be avoided where possible. And vertical ellipsis should be removed as well. On the topic of ellipsis, they contain only three periods (...) no more, no less. There are instances of missing punctuation and unnecessarily hyphenated words. There are many instances of bubbles that have little bits of the original japanese text left uncleaned. A lot of times, this is caused by using a brush to clean. Often a lasso selection and fill would be a much better (and quicker) choice. A brush is still recommended for touch-ups (be sure to zoom in at appropriate times).

Last edited on 11 October 2014, 13:47.

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Remove the Shotacon tag please, makes no sense since he's old enough to work and his body is has big has hers.

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don't remove the shota tag, he could be one in disguise! I mean, all the tags in a gallery are true!/endsarcasm

Yeah, he's old enough and big enough to get a job. probably should remove it.

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I'm not sure who added the shota tag, but idk how to remove tags, if someone could let me know, I'd appreciate it.

EDIT: looks like the shota tag was removed.

@someone9876
Fixed the spelling errors, although I definitely didn't catch 1 per page.
Edit: thanks for the tips, and I didn't even think of using the lasso tool, I was just using the rectangle selection tool, and using brush, to clean up the missed bits.

Last edited on 13 October 2014, 07:21.

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@PoorMuttski

Agreed, the art on this one is terrible but somehow it kept me very entertained. It's so simple and straight to the point. It isn't trying to do more than it needs.

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every motherfucker's dream ;)

thanks for the share :)

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Thanks a lot @klownboy for the translation & also @tkhang for posting the bounty in the first place!
I am growing more & more fond of "freehand Tamashii" that it hurts to see less of his work getting translated & released.

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☓ untill
❍ until

:eng101:

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very good +5 stars :D

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@pingingsound

ugh, guess I didn't upload the fixed version... >.>

Edit: should all be fixed now.

Last edited on 11 October 2014, 08:21.

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MOTHERFUCKER

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New freehand in english? Thanks klownboy

I do not know your reason for translating this work, but if it interests you at all there is at least one more freehand comic that could do with some love. Currently only available in japanese and whatever junk language laruffi speaks.

https://e-hentai.org/g/722374/1d4c67c996/

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Finally!! ZThanks for the translation. Please do more mother son stuff too.

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Thank you!

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@~six~

I intend too ;)

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I'm not exactly a fan of freehand tamashii's work but this by far is his finest work in my opinion. Also, this is the type of plot that turns me on the most!

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It's not the finest art, but at least this work is not the same boring mother+shota thing..I liked it very much, 5 stars

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He's 20 years old and just graduated high school a few months ago? Is that normal in Japan? You'd think it a BS/CYOA age to make him more 'legal' but a 'shota' wouldn't be out of high school and living in his own apartment.

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The warning on page 3 is a request by the circle for people not to download and upload their work outside of DLSite, as it's disruptive to their livelihood.

Of course, anyone coming here knows that they're going to read a lot of illegitimately-uploaded work, so I don't expect this to surprise anyone, or change their minds. But personally, I feel bad whenever I come across a message like this in a work I'm translating. I do this stuff because I want to make the readers here happy, and for the challenge of it, but I don't want to hurt the people who make the work I enjoy and translate. I usually avoid working on stuff by authors who make explicit requests like that in the future.

Use that information as you will.

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I'm not the biggest fan of how Freehand draws but I do love his story, 10/10.

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gracias por el aporte.

cuantos chapters tiene?

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Thanks klownboy!

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thans, condom sex with a female of 41 years old???

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1st part (you are here): https://e-hentai.org/g/747651/8f86b6eb93/
2nd part: https://e-hentai.org/g/1124896/c2476d970c/

@x666x18
Simplified explanation: A woman has less 'eggs' as they grow older, making it less likely to get pregnant, it is still possible for a 41 year old woman to get pregnant. However, any pregnancies past a certain age is deemed 'risky' because their bodies aren't as strong, and they have likely already developed health problems as with the case of many middle-aged people.

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A live action of this is out look this up JAV- MIMK-082

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https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ249620.html

this seems to be an updated compilation

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