I have seen many grammatical errors and horrors in this comic. So I decided to do it again.

I hope you help me with the mistakes that can be found here. see you.

this is guy has terrible engish

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Suggestion - why don't you just write this up in your native tongue for now, then let a native English speaker translate it to English. Have a little respect for your own language man - you're cutting out people from your homeland for dodgy English. No-one wins in that deal.

Language aside though, the artwork itself looks pretty good, so you have that going for you.

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boys, am happy because you comment in my post but... don,t be so hard with me.learn english is not easy. well thanks of all ways.

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Thanks for this, appreciate it! Any chance of updates?

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What is grammar?

-This story in a sentence

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Yes... Divided by Zero

you right... This english ( the first 30 pages ) are sadly bAD... but i am learning english, for it you see many errors here... thanks for you comment

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okay which site does this comic come from?and who is the artist of this comic?

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this comic come from http://gia222n.deviantart.com/ and I am the artist of this comic

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Page 3: "I can't take it off".
Next page: takes it off.

Jajajaja

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