This is a fan made rewrite & edit sequel of The Amanoja9 work.

I used all of his tanks for the editing:
https://e-hentai.org/g/735983/d223d7f416/
https://e-hentai.org/g/263764/48c4142c65/
https://e-hentai.org/g/198492/a18015285e/
https://e-hentai.org/g/116125/5ad84c8e9f/
https://e-hentai.org/g/113258/54a6f937c8/

https://e-hentai.org/g/631617/cdce0524ed/
https://e-hentai.org/g/632046/a0c6b01a5a/
https://e-hentai.org/g/632302/997b6735cc/
https://e-hentai.org/g/633711/a764221fc3/

... Not bad

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Nice work. I hope there is more to come.

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the Amanoja9 always finds new ground to break... this is no exception. Cant wait for more.

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Anyone knows the original of this? Rewrites are not my thing

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@ruukasu

Should be "TS I Love You"

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Fuck that guy downvoting people.

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I can't say I'm a fan of this rewrite but the decensor is okay.

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This is some really weird shit, yet I can't seem to stop reading...

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I really can't understand all this hate towards rewrites... It's like a music cover, you just do it in your own style and taste. And I did some pretty heavy editing.

100+ additions to favorite within 2 days is already a win for me, you guys can keep with your down-vote hate campaign ^^

"Rewrites should be grounds for expunging." = I don't like it so no one should like it!!!!

I'm not saying that you have to like it, but I've you're not willing to read it and make a constructive criticism, why even enter a gallery that have [Rewrite] in the title???

@ichirohiroku
I'm not saying that you "can hate me all you want I don't care at all!", I'm saying: If you don't have arguments and constructive criticism, there's no point for me to care. There's a big difference.

Last edited on 22 January 2015, 01:43.

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Rewrites are cancer. Stop defacing this artist's original dialogue with your erotic nonsense.

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Rewrites should be grounds for expunging.

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@Bia.Matsuo
You're acting the same as that Laruffi troll with your shitty attitude. "Ahahaha hate me all you want I don't care at all!"

How is a rewrite of a doujin like a music cover? People actually stick to the song lyrics. But you practically desecrate the artist's orginal story and art with your crappy rewrite.

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And here I was browsing milf stuff, when I stumble upon this, and I said to myself what a wonderful world...click...wait is this futanari..fuck noo, awww awwwwwwwww not again.....

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The word "rewrited" on the cover doesn't engender a lot of faith in the writer's ability.

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@rowrowrow
I wasn't recognizing it because of the different sequence page with different works, now I see. Already read all TS I Love You works by the way lol

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"This is a fan made rewrite & edit"
if you're somebody's fan you dont go shit all over their work. Seriously if you're making rewrites in 2015 you clearly missed out on what has been going down in the last couple of years.

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"melts every mothers heart"

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take my qq 1375343128

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Sorry people for being a noob, but what is a rewrite? I am sure not everyone knows, then it would be easy for the concerned people to upvote/downvote the posts. It is idiotic if I start voting without knowing.
is it like changing the dialogues/text to whatever you want??
Please explain.
Thank you.

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@the_small

rewrites are not translations, they are not re edits, they are just fake translations that can loosely be based on a real translation.
basically, when someone doesn't know japanese but wants to write a english version, its a rewrite...

rewrites should only be acceptable when

a) they are funny, take the frosting rewrite as an example... food network porn i think it was called
b) there is NO translation available whatso ever, though it would still be iffy if i would allow it.
c) there is no OTHER version at all, all you can find is the rewrite.

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I love how anything with a hint of DFC gets immediately removed, yet awful shit like this stays.

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Lol this rewrite managed to make this even more fucked up

Base +6, jfragrettel +5, White Joker +16, ntsmooth +7, clockbot +5, ralas +6

Are people really getting pissy that someone did a rewrite of some porn? You are being elitist about a crossdressing hentai?

Like fucksake the real version is out there if you really need it, this doesn't take away from it, just someone having a bit of fun.

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If you're going to going to do a rewrite don't tag the artist name on it, instead tag yours. Otherwise people are going to initially think that the artist wrote this garbage and everyone needs to know who's the jackass doing the rewrites and avoid them like the plague.

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Please ignore my comment

Last edited on 28 February 2015, 01:57.

Base +6

To a guy who makes those rewrites...
Dude, just stop. You run with just one theme, a shemale mother, meaning you fantasize about sucking your dad's dick if he had boobs. You don't even try alternate stories, you are just one trick pony forcing your creepy ass fantasies down our throats. Pay your dad a visit, kneel and blow him, jeeez.

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i love it, keep doing more pls, i don't care if this is a rewrite..... your concept about shemales... i can't describe how i like it with words, just thx

Base +6, clockbot -5, fun_bot +6, DaftBehemoth +6

Jimmy, your mom is dad, bond with me Jimmy.

Okay daddy.

Base +4, clockbot -5, ziggyb -7, Shinty +6, Schramm_13 +6, MultiFetishes -5

Fucking Christ, It's not like the original was a masterpiece either. They way all of you are talking you'd think he drew a dick on the face of the Mona Lisa.

I mean yeah, this isn't particularly good, but it's nice to have all the images in one gallery instead of having like five tabs open with a coherent enough story so i'm not look at kanji while I jerk off. And honestly, isn't that what we're all here for at the end of the day?

Last edited on 03 February 2016, 10:07.

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it feels like The Ultimate Showdown Of Ultimate Destiny

His panel editing job was pretty good. Certainly gets an A for effort.

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@Randomoose

You see, it is all about who you know. In certain parts of the world, politics is centered on who you know, no matter how stupid or senseless or evil that individual is. That is why the South is so fucked.

Base +6

what a hot hot hot one

Base +4

Thats messed up, im sickened! * continues fapping*

Base +3, JazzC +3, Void161 +4

So I came here to shit on this thinking it was gonna be ezwriter quality but this is actually good... like 5 star good! I mean it has some typos and the english feels off sometimes but it's still pretty great! I kind of feel bad now! This is a rewrite I can get behind!! Keep up the good work my man!

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