[DarkmasterN]sLightly abOVe avErage (work in progress)

Posted on 05 May 2015, 11:32 by: mikol

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Keiko Tachibana is an average High school girl.

Scratch that. She's a self proclaimed "Slighty above average" High school girl who has dedicated herself to being only moderately better than the social norm. However one day she gets a visit from someone Way over the top.

An inter dimensional cutie whom goes by the name Llla-Elac Ngtholi Cllegogg, also known as "Laila" to humans. She has come to destroy the sanity, and lives of everyone at Daisuke Ryuzaki high school.

However, poor Keiko seems to be the only one at school whom has noticed this terrifying beast, and to make matters worse, she's staying at her house!!

Will Keiko be driven insane by the ramblings of this terrible alien and her Slightly above average lifestyle tossed to the wind? Or will she succeed in defeating this strange alien menace!?

Find out in this incredibly odd web comic inspired by the works of H.P. Lovecraft!

Posted on 04 September 2012, 18:51 by: blagblag

The art is *really* not to my taste and the writing is amateurish, but kinda like it...

pg 43 is funny. Needs more of the cultist girl from the beginning.

Posted on 04 September 2012, 19:50 by: stabbybelkar

Oh wow. This was fantastic! There was absolutely nothing here that I could fap to and yet I still want to see more of it.

Posted on 31 October 2013, 18:34 by: marc455

This comic has a strange charm to it. I'd say it's the characters and the "distinct" art style.

Page 109

Ah, finally. Looks like the "fun" part is going to start again.

Page 118

Well, gotta have to admit, this has become one of my favorite webcomics.

Edit:

Is this read left or right? It seems to switch all the time...

Posted on 06 September 2012, 13:43 by: Ihocheso

This is both terrifying, gross, and absolutely adorable and I need more of it as soon as possible.

Posted on 06 September 2012, 14:56 by: King of gotland

A better read than fap.
Cant wait for the next part.
Also: s (L) ightly ab (OV) e av (E) rage
L O V E

Posted on 12 September 2012, 00:20 by: EDON

shouldn't his get a (work in progress) added to the title?

Posted on 19 September 2012, 03:08 by: Kelsero

Read right to left?

Posted on 19 September 2012, 06:27 by: HeraldofPain

Has good pacing and a fun story.Now if you add some H scenes...

Posted on 24 September 2012, 02:06 by: Ikonos

well clap clap for the clever name

Posted on 24 September 2012, 02:49 by: Charkan

http://darkmastern.deviantart.com/

Posted on 02 October 2012, 11:46 by: shadowuser

Would love to see more. It's a really good story! :D

Posted on 09 October 2012, 21:26 by: roguex187

what the hell did i just read?... and why do i enjoy it...

Posted on 12 October 2012, 04:07 by: waterlas

Kind of like nyaruko

Posted on 13 October 2012, 04:09 by: holyfrog77

Awesome! A Lovecraftian comedy with lesbian undertones?! I approve.

Posted on 27 November 2012, 18:21 by: royoki

"you're such a wonderful class when i use violence"

not sure if legit.......

Posted on 27 November 2012, 20:38 by: heis3780

Seemed kind of stupid at first, but its very, VERY good!!! The story gets more interesting over the chapters. Besides, it explores the limits between sane and crazy, with several insights. Very good. Looking forward to read more!!!!

Posted on 06 December 2012, 20:43 by: guroseeker

why did you put this in guro category ? what the fuck is this ? :)

Posted on 20 December 2012, 14:03 by: auntesaunt

Thank you very much.

Posted on 02 January 2013, 02:41 by: Humbard

Strangely enough I like this story and I can't wait to see more of it until it's completed x]

Posted on 12 January 2013, 14:25 by: SVT Cobra

Dude, are you fapping to this shit? No wonder why you're all socially disconnected.

Posted on 31 January 2013, 21:04 by: SUPA_L33T_H4X0RD

if only lovecraft was still alive. I simply cannot imagine his reaction to this fine work of art which I enjoy reading every night.

Posted on 07 February 2013, 17:31 by: Eclissi

While this comic have it's flaws i find it... interesting.
I mean, it's the first time i actually read something without my dick on hand and trust me that's quite an achievement you got there.

Posted on 05 March 2013, 15:35 by: rainman_

It seems that a lot of the other readers here are offended by the material covered in this manga (it's a manga right?), but I find it entertaining to say the least, quite original and there isn't a plot device that's heavily relied upon as in a lot of other amateur works, I dare say that it's better than those heaps of generic harem/action/romance/or_what_have_you shounen/shoujo manga out there even though they are supported by more or less big name publishing companies, my only complaint is that I can't keep up with any updates since I don't frequent EH very much, and this work doesn't appear to be listed in mangaupdates. A plus for this hidden little gem is the heavy presence of Lovecraft's mythos (which you either like or dislike) which, in my opinion, might explain some of the unfounded bland hate (when criticizing, one is obliged to give valid reasons as to why one judges the value of the work in question as either good or bad), finally to the author, keep it up dude (if you're one), you have an audience that likes what you're offering, and please if you can, add this to the mangaupdates database (I am not sure whether they accept original English work or not, but yours is a fine piece of whacked good read)
cheers.

Posted on 28 March 2013, 03:31 by: Rendarg

i came here for hentais and now i'm loling so hard... a cthulhu manga, the arkham library, yamanaka flower shop, and ftaghn!! hahaha, wonderfull. this keeps getting better and better

Posted on 14 May 2013, 10:55 by: quandox

Artist really needs to work on his panel layouts, graph paper layouts makes it tiring to read.

Posted on 27 June 2013, 12:11 by: Emmentaler

God damn where's the porn.

Posted on 21 August 2013, 03:45 by: pureyang

This isn't porn, its a neat little webcomic
source: http://slightlyaboveaverage.smackjeeves.com/archive/

Posted on 29 August 2013, 15:26 by: LizNevada

amazing work if you ask me.
keep up

Posted on 12 October 2013, 07:06 by: DeadW4

Finally, some action begins... after almost two hundred pages.
2Emmentaler: we don't need porn here. 'coz this story for fapping mind, not body.

Posted on 04 July 2014, 05:23 by: Dude Guyman

Came looking for big tits and tentacle fucking, found art.

At first I was going to lambaste this for the amateur drawing, bizarre story, almost unreadable panel order, childish dialogue, and constant teases of actual pornographic content that never seems to appear. But then I realized the genius behind it. Lots of people can write and illustrate a story about a girl and an eldritch tentacle monster, but it takes genuine skill to transport the reader themselves into the very realm of terror and sexual confusion that the protagonist inhabits.

This comic manages to project Lovecraftian madness directly into the reader's mind as his own writings aspired to, but never quite managed. Digesting it feels like a fever dream. You're never sure if you should be reading left to right, or right to left. The text randomly changes size from perfectly readable across the room, to "squinting three inches from your screen." Characters' body proportions change seemingly at will, and as a result the only way to identify them reliably is hair style. Sometimes there's no shading at all, and sometimes there's photoshop's gradient tool.

Everything combines to create an experience not unlike a train wreck. But where most people might say, "it's like a train wreck, horrible but you can't stop watching," this comic is more like being a passenger on the train wreck. You have no choice but to participate, and you might suffer severe psychological trauma when it's over.

Eleven out of ten.

Posted on 02 September 2014, 12:08 by: MioAkiyama

OH fuck man! I have the sampler of this book in my library! Wow, nostalgic.

Posted on 10 September 2014, 14:53 by: spleenjuice

No offense here, since I know people don't like it when people complain about stuff they don't have to click, but this is not that good.
It's mediocre at best. And I want to like it, don't get me wrong, but it gets a page added and it gets bumped to the top of the new content list *EVERY SINGLE DAY.*

Why does this need to be bumped daily? Doesn't the uploader have a BLOG or something to use?

This could be literally the best piece of art ever drawn, and it would get annoying seeing it get bumped on a daily basis.

Posted on 21 September 2014, 15:58 by: Owyn

just one thing, why did you upload downsized images into gallery? 786x1017 instead of 1500x1941 available on deviant art.
I just can't read letters n shit here...

example: https://e-hentai.org/mpv/740013/e86fb065e4/#page209 vs http://darkmastern.deviantart.com/art/Slightly-Above-Average-Page-201-430097694

Posted on 03 March 2015, 19:35 by: sexypanda

So fucking tired of seeing this at the top of the list everytime I search for keywords. I hope this shit either ends or someone stops updating it every fuckin day. Thanks.

Diddlyding you got some terrible taste son.

Last edited on 13 March 2015, 23:03.

Posted on 28 April 2015, 20:22 by: Solipsist

@Supa_L33T...That guy with the stupid name,
Really? The art got better? It looks like it became worse with time...

Posted on 13 May 2015, 16:17 by: IshidaKarin

Found a new fav.
Made my day so much better :3
I hope this keeps going.
F O R E V E R

Posted on 30 June 2015, 22:20 by: tommymotmal

Why does this need to be bumped daily? Doesn't the uploader have a BLOG or something to use?

Posted on 01 July 2015, 12:32 by: Inotak

Holy shit, I just noticed that the rating for this comic is slightly above average. Did you fuckers do that on purpose?

Posted on 01 July 2015, 19:27 by: tommymotmal

this is just fucking ridiculous seeing this at the front page every time. go post it on their website, or upload once it's completed

Posted on 02 July 2015, 23:04 by: Bahaumet

This is based on H.P. Lovecraft's work, no? :D :D :D

Posted on 09 July 2015, 22:19 by: PregnantWhoreFucker

That's a long pregnancy... O_o

Posted on 11 August 2015, 15:59 by: diztrakted

Post updates weekly and you'll piss a lot less people off.

That being said, though the art is... messy, the drawings of eldritch beings are pretty good and the story is well above expectations. Not bad, will keep reading.

Posted on 22 October 2015, 12:24 by: Mrsuperhappy

I don't know what the 'average' rating given to galleries is, but I did have a chuckle with this having the title it does, and currently it is at exactly 2.5/5 star rating.

Posted on 03 February 2016, 11:28 by: Mrsuperhappy

@Greaper, Too bad, why do you think that makes it acceptable to expunge it? Unless there is another gallery of this which is just as complete, it is not a duplicate and can be updated as often as the artist updates it.

@Farky, yes but he is currently trying to expunge it, and had filled in the 'petition to expunge' that was the basis of my comment.

Last edited on 05 February 2016, 06:19.

Posted on 05 February 2016, 21:44 by: Mrsuperhappy

@Greaper, While I can appreciate you not wanting to see something, if there really are tags which don't apply, by all means post in the tagging abuse thread on the forums to have them cleared. I haven't read it so I dont know which tags you're referring to, but posting there is the only way you will get rid of them, commenting here that it is the case won't do anything. You may not like it but 'ongoing' works have no limits on how often they can be updated and will never be expunged for updating too frequently. There is also a non-h category, this site is primarily hentai but not exclusively.

Posted on 25 February 2016, 13:58 by: EcchiKitty

VERY nice. Ran across this a long time ago, pages were out of order, and I swiftly lost interest. Saw it pop up a few times, but ignored it. Today I was bored, and figured why not? Very glad I took the chance.

The writing and art, at first glance, are pretty simple. But the layers of concept and plot build upon each other very well. It takes a few chapters to get into it, but ends up being quite good, in a terrible disturbing sort of way.

Posted on 30 April 2016, 10:31 by: slade745

An art on e-hentai is supposed to be given the satisfaction of the viewer to look at it by choice every once in a while, this can be reminiscent of how some art galleries only update about once a month. If you're constantly gonna keep posting the same dragonball Z shit for people to look at with a choice, then post the Deviantart artist page and leave it at that for the people that are interested in this gallery to go check out their stuff on THEIR PAGE because that's what Deviantart is for, it basically gives you a platform for people to follow artists personally for their constant art posts.
I'm not surprised how it has such a well deserved rating considering that it's being shoved down everyone's throats every damn day by being at the top of every fucking list of popular tags. Can anyone at least give me an idea of how I can at least block this gallery or even block the imbecile poster that keeps spamming this every day so that I wouldn't have to see it ever.

Posted on 06 May 2016, 00:25 by: FarkyMac

Hey, look. Your gallery is still at 2.67 stars and dropping, and almost all of the comments are negative. It might be time to realize that we don't want to see this here.

Go'way, smelly. =3=

Last edited on 03 July 2016, 20:39.

Posted on 21 July 2016, 17:29 by: Genesis1993

Can someone please Update the torrent. That would be awesome.

Posted on 11 August 2016, 23:42 by: penislord1

Needs more porn, that or a porny non-canon sidestory.

Posted on 12 August 2016, 07:49 by: l4chuga

Honest question, why are most of the characters drawn so thick or busty or both? Did fast food take over Japan or what?

Posted on 08 October 2016, 15:38 by: nwahnamednerevar

Why is there a yuri tag? As far as I can tell, the only "yuri" scene was near the beginning and that was a joke. Is there yuri to come, or something?

Posted:	2015-05-05 11:32
Parent:	809603
Visible:	No (Replaced)
Language:	English
File Size:	220.7 MiB
Length:	333 pages
Favorited:	576 times

language:	english
artist:	darkmastern
female:	amputee bbw big breasts guro monster girl tentacles vomit vore yuri
other:	story arc

Rating:		857
Average: 2.70