Just translate it using Indonesian version (my own + V-Do's help) with a little editing, fixing by myself. If you find any error in my translation, and have any advice, suggestion, etc., please tell me (prefer PM) so I can fix it asap.
I didn't read everything yet, but I found it really strange when I saw the word "Bachelor", like how can it be related to the KanColle world. Then after comparing the word in the RAW version (which is "童貞"), it means in reality a "Virgin".