the real size is to big imposible for me to upload=_=

What? Why? How?

I get, yeah, mummification fetish. But uh, context? Please?

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Kinda agree. Art is well done. But no background story, or anything. Seems rather .... disjointed.

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soooooo.... what just happend? .. in any way? i have no clue what so ever is their more to this?

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I don't understand porn anymore.

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The follies of no text.
Generally speaking, in such "brain washing" genres, the reader doesn't need to know Why those character suffer such treatment, but it is necessary to understand What is happening to them, and what is going to. Part 'o teh sexz is about arousing expectations as well, no?

This is in particular sad, seeing as the author put in the effort of building up an exposition with no porn, but...There's no exposition to be found.
It would probably be better off for the author to just draw the fetishistic segments right away, if one's not going to actually develop any sort of story. <:

P.S: It says "incomplete", so I presume this is the ordinary hit-and-miss first chapter, which generally doesn't work at all -- but it at least serves as a device for buildup.
Still, even if the 2nd chapter is enjoyable thanks to this 27 pages of baffling chain of events, it could'd been planned better.
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*clicks on artist tag -> show tagged galleries*

I have a feeling the artist tag might be wrong...

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This is a commission from Hacker90 and it was/is on his dA

i liked it when it was first posted....

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I actually like it. although sadly i had no actual porn. hope he makes a sequel where asuka is raped and tortured by that pissed of maid that she hit.

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no, it is wrong. the artist is not me (Ricardo Canheta). please fix it. I never did such comic.

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Hah, nice to see my commission e-hentai. Wondered when it would strike...

No plans for a sequel yet.

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A first!
The commissioned artist tells us the work has been stolen; the named artist says he never did it.
And, it's posted by neither of them.
Joker 21 may have a problem, heh?

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He got it wrong for who did the work originally. Sandertulk was the commissioned artist and Rcanheta had no involvement. Not even how he got tagged onto it...

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