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[chaccu] Inyouchuu Shoku ~Ryoushokutou Taimaroku~ Harami Ochiru Shoujo-tachi Ch. 4 (Heroine Pinch Vol. 7) [English] [shakuganexa] [Digital]

[chaccu] 淫妖蟲 蝕~凌蝕島退魔録~ 孕ミ堕チル少女達 第4話 (ヒロインピンチ Vol.7) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2015-05-19 06:29
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Posted on 19 May 2015, 06:29 by:   shakuganaexa    PM
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Translated and typeset by shakuganexa. Comment any grammar errors and I will fix them as soon as possible. If you enjoyed reading this, please consider donating credits or hath.

Update: Edited, thanks aurumauriga for the edits.

Raws:
https://e-hentai.org/g/783175/4d22741f39/
Posted on 19 May 2015, 01:52 by:   ale137    PM
Score +23
that plot twist at the end
Posted on 19 May 2015, 02:26 by:   CronaBaka    PM
Score +40
So, they weren't intending to tell her to begin with. She would've been better off busting their balls.
Posted on 19 May 2015, 02:31 by:   Yossarian762    PM
Score -31
i'm gonna save wilfriback the trouble of posting something retarded, and say *nasal voice, pushes up glasses* this isn't netorare, because it doesn't feel like netorare, even though she has a boy she likes, and thinks about how she really wishes she could give her first kiss and virginity to him and wishes he would save her
Posted on 19 May 2015, 04:11 by:   CDub7888    PM
Score +5
At least you're projecting properly, Yossarian.
Posted on 19 May 2015, 04:17 by:   Solipsist    PM
Score -58
Wait, there's more of Inyouchuu? Man, this is like Fate/Stay night...It just does not know how to stand down and relish in its initial glory.
Posted on 19 May 2015, 04:29 by:   Buffalo01    PM
Score +46
While I like this very much I have to ask, why do chapter 4 first? Unless the other 3 are already translated? If so could someone be kind enough to point them out to me?
Posted on 19 May 2015, 05:07 by:   imercenary    PM
Score +31
And people wonder why picking up girls at the beach is so hard these days.
Posted on 19 May 2015, 05:24 by:   aurumauriga    PM
Score +126
Here are the grammatical errors; almost every page has at least one. I grouped them by page so it'll be easier for you to track them.

p1:
“Isn’t this her glasses?” - “Aren’t these her glasses?”
“Tell me? Where is Takeru and Sui!?” - “Tell me! Where are Takeru and Sui?”
“If you accept come…” - “If you accept, come…”

p2:
“Why did they want meet with me in the beach? Do they really just want to hang out and swim with me…” - “Why do they want to meet with me at the beach? Do they really just want to hang out and swim with me…”
“Takeru and Sui is nowhere to be seen.” - “Takeru and Sui are nowhere to be seen.”

p3:
“There’s suspicious about these assholes.” - “There’s something suspicious about these assholes.”
“We didn’t put anything to that drink.” - “We didn’t put anything in that drink.”

p4: “They must have obtain this aphrodisiac from a demon.” - “They must have obtained this aphrodisiac from a demon.”

p5: “You have a beautiful pair of breasts you know.” - “You have a beautiful pair of breasts, you know.”

p6: “Don’t you dare to throw a tantrum or else, we won’t…” - “Don’t you dare throw a tantrum, or else we won’t…”

p7:
“Seems your resisting the aphrodisiac well…” - “Seems you’re resisting the aphrodisiac well…”
“To have my first kiss stole…” - “To have my first kiss stolen…”

p8:
“Your kisses is not really skilful.” - “Your kisses are not really skilful.”
“Check out whether this girl is a virgin or not!?” - “Check out whether this girl is a virgin or not!”
“We are filming her pussy… before becomes mess up…” - “We are filming her pussy… before it becomes/gets messed up.”
“Is this girl really want to be a AV actress…” - “Does this girl really want to be an AV actress…”

p9:
“Not even Yamato have seen it…” - “Not even Yamato has seen it…”
“Are you guys ready!” - “Are you guys ready!?”

p10:
“My entrance is being rip apart by a think dick!” - “My entrance is being ripped apart”
“My virginity is taken by this person…” - “My virginity was taken by this person.”

p11:
“Your dick getting bigger inside me!” - “Your dick is getting bigger inside me.”
“I’ll make sure my cum shoot inside your uterus!” - Also awkward because he’s the one who’s going to shoot, not his cum. “I’ll make sure to shoot my cum inside your uterus!”

p12:
“Was she really a virgin until now! Anyway, you’re now a used goods!” - “Was she really a virgin until now!? Anyways, you’re now used goods!”
“From here on! This “woman” will now make her debut as a AV actress!” - “From here on this “woman” will debut as an AV actress!”
“Could you take this camera and film us!” - “Could you take this camera and film us!?”

p13: “Although I wish I was the one who taken your hymen…” - “Although I wish I was the one who took your hymen…”

p15:
“Your dicks is splitting my pussy and anus apart.” - “Your dicks are splitting my pussy and anus apart.”

“It’s dangerous day for you today, right?” - “It’s dangerous for you today, right?”

p18:
“I can’t breath!” - “I can’t breathe!”
“Why are these tentacles are attacking everyone!?” - “Why are these tentacles attacking everyone!?”

Also an awkward line:
p10: “Once I pierce my dick up…” - Not wrong but it sounds awkward; it sounds as if he will pierce his dick (ouch) and not the girl’s vagina (with his dick). “Once I pierce my dick (up) into your pussy…”

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Based on my very quick research this seems to be an adaptation of the 2nd VN.
Posted on 19 May 2015, 06:36 by:   shakuganaexa    PM
Score +14
@aurumauriga

Thank you for the edits.
Posted on 20 May 2015, 22:57 by:   scrappy135    PM
Score +22
This girl just can't seem to catch a break. In everything featuring her, she's getting raped one way or another.
Posted on 10 November 2015, 00:13 by:   BillNine10    PM
Score +26
How many virginities does this chick have? She loses it once every episode.

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