I hope you enjoy it. Translation into English is not grammatically correct. Sorry.
Edit:
- Was added next page (for continuing).
- Was corrected a few minor graphical flaws.
- Were adjusted following pages: 07, 25, 26, 27, 34, 36, 40, 42 and added 43.
Edit:
- I added a new version of the title page.
- The prologue page.
- The ending page.
- And modified some trivia on other pages.

Thank you for adding this!

I'm really happy to see that there will be a continuation of this series. I loved it :)

Base +4

I hope the predator gets to fuck them again as this was pretty good.

Base +6

The grammar is a bit off (obviously) but this was actually pretty good. I'd be interested in seeing more of the same theme.

Base +6

Great concept and great execution. Loved the parts where Predator just rips the clothes on their crotch and anal fucks them fully clothed(hothothot). Keep up with that creativity. Although yeah the grammar really does need some work, if you could find someone to help you out with that it would be nice considering the quality and thought put out into this, it would be a shame.

lctr: It's best if it's translated from your native tongue(Mine is Hiligaynon and don't think you're one lol) to English than trying to fix it as it is now since a lot of context has already been lost when you translated it.

Base +6, Li+x +2, thebulbaderp +2

Ruichi: If you want help with this, translate these texts into the correct grammar, send to this discussion download link and I re-edit the text boxes.

Base +1, Li+x +2

Awesome comic, we want more of this style.

Base +4, Ren Ichimoku +7, thebulbaderp +2

Very, very nice!

Base +7

How do you make this kind works? have you been using some program?

Base +6

Lucky ass predator!

It's really nice seeing a predator screw my two hottest gaming characters. I think it's better than some dude.

Last edited on 01 March 2015, 06:09.

Base +1, galzpanic +6

i like this comic

Base +5