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http://www.melonbooks.com/index.php?main_page=product_info&products_id=IT0000179749

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Reuploaded the whole thing as I got someone to proofread the machine like translation.

its times like this that i wish there was such a thing as a bitch tag cause fuck this bitch

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Now this was disturbing...

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the male:snuf tag must be added

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this author frankly at first I liked it, but his way of conducting the stories began to tire, women are unnecessarily cruel and nasty.

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I have to say that this isn't nearly as good as Hachimitsu. Not only is the art much more amateurish (look at the middle of pg 10 - the way she kicks him over is so stiff it looks ancient Egyptian), but the story isn't any good either. Just "evil scientist shrinks guy to nothingness," without even the pretext of playful revenge that got out of control like in "Little Game" to motivate this wanton cruelty. The artists might have pulled it off if they actually characterized her as demented and sociopathic, but they didn't even bother to do that. It just feels kind of vacant.

Last edited on 08 July 2015, 16:24.

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Still jerked off ;)

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How can she see or hear him?

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