Here's another Laruffi fix. A REALLY good Mothercon from Kai Hiroyuki(A Mangka known for his nice looking guys and pretty girls and women. There's usually a strong emphasis on character designs with this artist.)

Ranzu worked hard on this one. Editing and proofreading it within 25 minutes record time.

Trust me, its completely readble(I had him change the MC's name spelling to "Yuu" instead of "You-Kun.".

Enjoy! More Kai Hiroyuki commissions will be coming in the near future.

Bless you guys and your work. Keep on fighting the good fight.

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@Ripsmash. Thanks.

For some reason the gallery is getting mediocre votes. Ranzu and I are trying to repair and fix Laruffi's poor translations, bear with us and be grateful.

Is even MENTIONING Laruffi's name in a title that much of a jinx?

If so, then going forward I'll post the words (Laruffi Fix).

The Spring Castle commission is almost ready, hold tight.

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"Laruffi Fix" would most definitely attract some curious eyes. But then again, poor Laruffi. haha

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Here's hoping you fare better in your endeavors than I.

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@FieldsofWeed. Thanks. People have missed you. I faved your Yokkora translation last year. It was THAT good. I am sorry that your were given alot of shit by trolls last year. The trick to fixing Laruffi's handiwork is to find a good editor. If your willing to have other Laruffi works fixed and uploaded, I can share Ranzu with you. He really wants the job.(Just pay him a few bucks and he can fix and proofread super quick.)

We can both STOP Laruffi. Teamwork is vital.

BTW, are you open to commissions?( I pay for One Shots.)

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I almost downvoted this after I read laruffii, it's a reflex.

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thanks for it ~~~!!!

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Why the hell is this tagged shota? seriously...

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@Usernam. I'm puzzled by that too.

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@JackMorrison
I don't do commissions or the like. The work I did before was partly out of spite for Laruffi and partly out of the feedback I received for it. The moment I got backlash from others was where I decided to stop.
I am willing to help out a bit with things like script and editing freely for you, on that part I don't mind.

Beyond that, I've left editing/fixing things completely. The only thing I've contemplated was going back to my Yokkora translation and decensoring/redrawing it.

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jfc, for a second there I thought its another one of those translations in "laruffi" language.

You guys are doing God's work on cleaning his filth.

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>Laruffi fix
First thought: Laruffi fixed someone else translation!? O_o

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So I'm to understand this is a rewrite of something that was already bordering on a rewrite (due to extremely poor translation). As much as I can appreciate what you're trying to do, that only makes things worse. Couple that with not actually fixing most of the problems with the original edit such as poor cleaning and typesetting (much of which was left intact from the original you edited over), I'm not really sure why this exists.

Best thing to do: Polish your own editing skills, join a group, find a translator, and get it done right.

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is this a re-edit or a retranslation?
if it's a re-edit, then thanks a bunch, but maybe I'll wait for a proper retranslation.

@JackMorrison

nice explanation, and since now I know it's a retranslation, thanks a lot for the hard work!
also no, I don't need to hurt my eyes again over what Laruffi had done before, thank you very much. although I somewhat agree that his work wasn't all machine.

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@FieldsofWeed. If you can translate script like Striborg or make Edits,Redraws and fixes to other commissions like Ranzu, that would be perfectly fine.

We NEED to repair Laruffi's handiwork. People need to remember that not all of his horseshit was machine translated. Nobody is going to waste time, resources and money completely re-translating his trash from scratch.

As they say, "One man's trash is another man's treasure."

@Bulopu. Naw, that'll never happen, he's too much of a coward.;)

Besides, who the hell would be stupid enough to hire him to fix someone's translation?

@Zippy8k. Thank you so much. Fixing Laruffi's shit is pretty easy. You just need to find a good editor who can make it readable.

@ncc1701. It's mostly a re-translation. Ranzu was easily able to change nouns and properly typeset sentences so they'd be legible and make sense. After all, the original One Shot was only 16 pages long.(Ranzu and I have also been omitting Laruffi's tainted watermarks).

Here's the original disastrous translation from Laruffi:

https://e-hentai.org/g/782631/48bfde084f/

As you can see, the difference is very clear. Note the way the MC's name is spelled.

@Someone. NO. It's mostly a re-translation. It's not a re-write.

@ncc1701. Thanks. We'll try our hardest to assure that they have quality.

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@JackMorrison
I can at the very least do some edits and fixes for you and give anything script-related a look over for errors. There were some awkward lines and grammatically incorrect sentences in this one that could have been caught with another pair of eyes looking over it.

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UPDATE 06-14-2015: Oh yeah, there's also this one "Anthology - Maman Love 06 - Boshi Soukan Anthology Chapter 08 [English] [End of Volume]". I'm not sure it was translated by Laruffi, but it was uploaded by Goatse who always upload Laruffi's, so I think it's really Laruffi's. It looks great but the typing is horrible.
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Well, you surely are putting some love into this. If more translators/editors feels that would be amazing. They would say "I have little time, but the translation will come out anyway because it's fun" instead of "I have little time, pay me if you want to use my time and body"(nothing personal, I really think if you do something just because the cash you're no different than a cashwhore. Just go find something else you like to do and spend your time on it.).

The top 3 or maybe the only Laruffi's mother & son incest I would like to see recovered are:

1 - (C86) [Gouon (SWA)] Haha Netori 2 Mama-tenchou Jitaku Kanraku Hen (Gundam Build Fighters)
2 - [Doi Sakazaki] Father is in Overseas Appointment so, The Mother and Son are alone
3 - [Yokoyama Lynch] Haha Gokoro

Really, I can't believe no one will translate Gouon's just because Laruffi.

There might be some more Yokoyama Lynch. Although his art is not great, I find both art and stories(from what I read from the other "real" english translations) very erotic.

As I've been posting in the galleries lately, if somebody is interested in translating some Zooerastia, Rush Rise Line, pink-noise or any other (mother and no netorare)incest and need help with editing, let me know. I want to have some fun editing those, but it's over a half year and nobody shows up.

I offered help to amoskandy to edit "[pink-noise (Mizuiro Megane)] Mama Shot-ime - Tropical Hen [Digital]" but he said he would do it all by himself(although isn't certain he will start a project on it.).

Thank you for your effort :)

@JackMorrison PMed them :) Striborg is more desperate for money than translation. So it's a big no. I'll wait for a reply from Lady Jyajya.

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@FieldsofWeed. Alright,cool. Just send me a PM on the forums.

@hentaieyebr. I've been eyeing the Gundam doujin for a while. We'll definitely be taking a look at that one soon.

For Translation works, hit up Striborg and Lady Jyajya, they're quite desperate for script work.

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So basically Laruffii had gotten SO bad that other people are coming in to fix his works.

Bless your souls, guys. Bless your souls.

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@hentaieyebr. I personally think Striborg does top notch translation scripts. He's given me very fair price quotes on translations.

@Hectotane, yup. Hopefully he'll finally go away and never return with his garbage.

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Laruffi's translations are accurate enough, all they need is a good re-edit. Keep up the good work, guys!

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@amoskandy. Thanks a million! Faved your Umino Sachi tank.

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existe la version en español???

gracias por el aporte

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Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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