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[Kahasina] Ame Toki (Kantai Collection -KanColle-) [English] [Bigbigfool]

[川科] 雨時 (艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-) [英訳]

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Posted on 23 September 2015, 19:52 by:   Bigbigfool    PM
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いわゆるラブです
It's the so-called love
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This one is not so easy to understand even for the readers in Japan, some of whom said it took them three times to get the point. I Hope my translation won't hinder the process of comprehension of what the artist wants to express.
Posted on 23 September 2015, 20:24 by:   fathervice    PM
Score +21
Another great example of the style of kahasina's work, full of that kind of effort (or ability points?) spending on the sentiments of the characters. Even though this is a story without h content, I like it.

Though it might be accurate to say so, it is understandable that why someone in pixiv said that he/she had to read three times to get the point. Sentiments (and love?) is not to be understood, but to be felt.
Last edited on 16 September 2016, 06:59.
Posted on 23 September 2015, 22:11 by:   schoolidolfootjob    PM
Score +7
nice..................
Posted on 24 September 2015, 01:17 by:   Gitami    PM
Score +147
To summarize, and thanks to Bigbigfool's comment over at the chinese version.

She married Admiral
They're in the military so they'd live apart
She stole things from him every time he visits her at night since their wedding night so he'd return in the morning
She has him braid her hair each morning, looking differently each time because he wasn't skilled.
Other girls notice how her braids are different on certain days at the morning assembly (perhaps when she and admiral walk in together) aka he stays over the night in her room and braids her hair when they wake up in the morning

Eventually he got skilled at braiding but she uses the same ribbon as the first night or she braid her hair differently from how admiral does it.

Kanmusu will notice left over right or right over left. Yan-colle.
Posted on 29 September 2015, 12:36 by:   SHB2    PM
Score +1
Thanks for the translation and explanation Bigbigfool (and Gitami for reposting it).
I was somewhat at loss when I read it and it did take me 3 re-readings to better get it. At first I was wondering if it was a dark tone or if I missed the point too... When Shigure said "admiral hasn't noticed" and Admiral replying "Since when? Maybe every time I've come" I thought she was telling him she was pregnant, and Admiral thought she was pregnant from him. Then she added "I've been the target for jealousy", what I understood was that she was abused by kanmusu AND other male staff(possibly as a request from the jealous kanmusu) since she got mrried and they noticed her flirting out at night with the admiral, and thus Shigure talking about letting out the cat of the bag, since she kept it a secret not to worry the admiral until the time of the doujin.

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