This is an ongoing porn comic by Ebluberry. There'll be some cool action and sex with alien girls. The story will be focus on the main character's life adventure as he goes through the universe finding the answers he is looking for.

For those who want to support Ebluberry's comics go to this link
http://www.patreon.com/ebluberry

or visit his page
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/ebluberry/profile

Page 6: "Oh, jesus christ. You are on a fucking spaceship, alone, and there is a blatant bullshit anime plot device?"

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from the cover it looked like a "Poject Spark" parody

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Really like the art!

Correction on page 17:

"and smell nice" There is no extra "s".

Last edited on 30 January 2015, 16:22.

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The art is really cool`
Some of the dialog could use a bit more thought, but not bad thus far.

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Only thing stopping me from calling this 5 stars is the dialogue. A shame that the dialogue gets in the way of the art.

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Pretty good for western artwork.

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like this art.good!

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Next chapter, her sister was secretly watching and wants to try the terran too?

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I call bullshit on the plot. Why do the sisters need to wear helmets if Jack has no problem breathing whatever. Exploding planets, I can deal with. But are you trying to tell me that you can't breathe on your own home planet? And then there's the sex scene. For someone with visible anatomical similarities to a human, you'd think the entacle monster would be a more interesting lay. "You just came a moment ago and now you're hard again?" Bitch, you didn't even know what part of him was the sex organ until a page ago, how could you possibly know the "terran" male refractory period? How the fuck you you even know that's semen and not pre-cum? You've had tentacle monster sex before and you don't know the difference between a kiss and a deepthroat. Apparently aliens have nipple teasing but no lip interaction whatsoever. The author tried to hard to make this a hentai.

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Art is pretty good, dialogue is not very good, and isn't it just super convenient that the lady he's sexing is anatomically human?

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what a lucky bastard, great art, cool story

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Like others have said, the hentai logic is pretty strong and the dialog isn't the greatest. It also would have been nice to get to know a little bit more about the sisters and their race but as this is on going I guess we may get around to that later.

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On page 31.... Did Horo just sneak into their ship?

EDIT: Page 70; way to go Joseph Joestar...

EDIT: Page 109; so, it seems like Duke Nukem DID hit on the Alien Queen, as that dude looks like his son...

Last edited on 04 June 2016, 11:19.

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On Page 17: Wait, why are we rare?
What happened to the rest of us?

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@ thud, I assume we are "rare" because we haven't expanded across the stars to the extent of others. When your "homeland" spans galaxies while we're still trying to get past 4 light years we would be very "rare" to find indeed.

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FUCK YEAH SPACE CATGIRLS

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Set my boner to cum... beam me up hottie ...I'm giving her all I've got capn :-)

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(=ﾟωﾟ)=

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pretty good so far where's the rest of it..

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Every time someone says "The hot semen is pouring into my womb." a unicorn dies.

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Glad to see this comic is progressing, though it needs an native-english-speaking editor.

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MORE CATGIRLS PLOX

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Delicious blue booty, delicious catgirl. I cant wait for the other sister to join in on the fun.
Cat girls, sexy blue bell and now a cutie sparky ? Cant wait for more. Kinda wonder what STDs he has to watch out for though lol
I....huh well i guess that king isnt as curious as humans when it comes to banging aliens....but what if he finds out he banged that sacrifice girl?

Last edited on 06 March 2016, 15:43.

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Yeah, I won't be surprised if he gets an threesome with the sisters.

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Is that Desmond Belmont?

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It's a good story

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nice painting style and i like it

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so graet!!

Last edited on 21 October 2015, 05:44.

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Thank you for the serious work, dude!!!

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I actually enjoy this a great deal! Nice artwork!

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Page: 55

Helloooo Mass Effect~

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Why is main character so worthless?
Edit: WHY IS THE MAIN CHARACTER SO WORTHLESS?!?!? He keeps surviving only due to luck. Substance looks like water? Try jumping in it. Cave on alien planet? Run in first! Alien excretes slime? Try tasting it!

Last edited on 04 February 2016, 17:34.

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Does anyone have any recommendations?

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Boy accidentally meets girl.
Girl needs to fuck boy vigorously.
Boy and girl fuck like there's no tomorrow.

Really?

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loving this.

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It has a great potential for sure

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i wish this would get more then one page at a time released

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God, hope that water gal has a more unique face than rest. The others looked the damn same.

Last edited on 22 December 2015, 17:13.

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@vevans0009 well, you got what you wanted.

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@jimbo21 I am VERY happy.

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Tears in water, ok.

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its magical tears

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And that, my dear children, is why you don't try to make contact with alien species after spending all day on a shag carpet.

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Page 69 aftermath: "We were so worried about your arse, and you were getting it on with the local fauna the whole time! Dickwad!"
At least I hope it goes something like that.
Well, maybe that king of theirs has something in store for us as well. Double action! 8)

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@ Yesman71
>Why do the sisters need to wear helmets if Jack has no problem breathing whatever

Shrapnel is a major cause of injury from attacks. You don't want any of it hitting your head, especially the eyes. I'd imagine it would be the same off-world.

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I love Rose please do a comic just about her or do more about her hin here. Somehow it makes me happy when a girl is happy about the guy even tho he just came inside her (you dont see that often mostly the cum and shes like nooo ... thats like rape and thats weird)

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been saving this for a while and just finished it (duh) , loved it =) ! Sensed some great influences like mass effect, hitchhikers guide and something else i can´t remember atm cause my buzz is just too perfect.... anyways loved the artwork and the story 55 thumbs up and one half of kiwi ! Keep it up.

"Give a man a fish and feed him for a day. Don’t teach a man to fish…and feed yourself. He’s a grown man. And fishing’s not that hard."

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Alien Girls: Check
Full Color: Check
Uncensored: Check
Creampie: Check
Good Artwork: Check

10/10

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Space: To fuck where no man has fucked before.
pg 79: I am pretty sure those "spines" are soft as sponges. I assume that because otherwise, OW MUH DICK.

Last edited on 04 February 2016, 06:46.

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MC quest to fuck all the cute aliens in space. He is a true hero.

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This is fantastic and the frequency of the updates is great too.

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突然就高产起来了

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[looks at page 79]

DON'T PUT YOUR DICK IN THERE!

[shakes head] ... What is wrong with you? (walks away)

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Vagina dentata

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I happen to like the really bland plot, thank you very much! Its great since All I want to see happens anyway.

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A forward blue-skinned girl with green hair is my fetish

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Just discovered this. 10/10 sexy as fuck

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lol page 82 " can i cum inside ? " Dude ask that before doing it xd

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I hope the dude dies.

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| ω・´)英文……咿

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so he got some blue alien poon, catgirl poon, and now some "eel/aquatic fish-girl/whatever she is" poon; wonder what's next

im betting on some jungle alien style poon

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nice it's intersting

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Ok now, standard harem king of equal fish-poon'dom, goes and sends out his guard to accompany the girls to find him?

banking on the idea that the fish/eel girl he boned was some sort of a reject, or some important figure that'll have them running away; maybe she'll gain the ability to speak after he's done, idk, but im loving what's been done so far

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haha, bad guy love to put up a good front, just wondering what he'll do to fuck the 2 girls, not that it will happen.

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@shyboy, i think it will something like "while you here, you can show me your gratitude for searching your stuff" and now go down and show me the goods!!

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so the player is fucking their latest sacrifice to some stupid fish thing?

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I am getting queasy because I have a feeling that fat king might do something to those sisters... I really hope not. Something about him just sickens me. xD

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@NicoMartok, same.
Also, why does every interplanetary leader have to be a big fat fuck that screws ladies all day long?

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So i guess the main guy currently fucking that king's daughter? LOL if that's actually the case

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Wait a shit, did she just summon those worm fuckers from the tremor series?

Aw hell, what's gonna happen now

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pg. 93 a random assassin appears

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you comic is amazing

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he makes her suck him off but doesn't eat her in return? what an asshole!

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太好看了 希望以后在才这样的本子

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Page 35:
"Holy shit! Is that a catgirl touching herself? Just to make sure I 'm not hallucinating, I should get closer to get a better look."

*surprise-shoves his dick into her*

That part made me laugh harder than I should at consensual sex that practically begins with a rape.

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dude, if she wants her tits to hang out, then let em loose, no need to cover them up (even if no nips)

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I'm guessing Eila ripping off Jack's clothes will become a running gag.

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Ah I forgotten that his jacket now has a "universal translator." Maybe they can understand each other now?

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Ah, the good ol' have-sex-with-an-innocent-youth-and-then-"adopt"-them-into-the-family/harem ploy. Works e'erytime. Let's see how long it takes for them to throw that family dynamic out the window and have a threesome.

Last edited on 19 April 2016, 00:05.

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ok, so at this point I guess whatever post I make is just going to get downvoted for even using one curse word, so please ignore this one here

Last edited on 07 May 2016, 01:50.

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@Veral have you seen that green pussy? It looks like it will eat Him!

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修罗场了，后宫起火啊，REA碧池，鱼人小三！

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such awesome work love good stuff like this. really good read make my dad sex a plus an cute stuff oway good

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[PG 79] Damn she's cute, I'd fuck her-- WHATTHEFUCKISTHAT?!?!

*awkward boner intensifies*

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That's a pretty big typo in the latest page. Hope the author corrects it. "rpomise"

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Oh man, you skipped the threesome?

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How could he skip the threesome? Maybe it's an additional scene reserved for Patreon supporters or something?

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You know, for a "Chief" dressed like a alien space wizard with a shit ton of authority, that guy talks awfully informal. Seriously, how many times did he say "guys"? Kinda breaks what little immersion there is here.

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@ Rayquaoxys - I agree. The art style is pretty good. MC looks a little weird but is otherwise entirely passable. However, the writing is sub-par at best. Both in execution and plot.

Rea - Apparently has had tons of sex with multiple alien species including what looks like being mind-raped and tentacle-raped, and is even making having sex with the MC's race basically something on her bucket list... but doesn't know what a kiss is? Feels like the author is really riding on the hentai-based idea of the super-innocent nymph which can be nice when done right... but it wasn't done right here.

Then Jack with that god-awful, "I'm sorry, I just can't control myself sometimes..." excuse. That's such a tiring thing to hear no matter how or where I hear it... I mean I kind of understand the whole, "It felt *that good*" kind of idea, but honestly it's just such a limp-wristed excuse on the MC's part, as well as a lame cop-out in writing quality because Jack made the first advance on the new girl. The only time I can see it legitimately working out is if the alien made the advance, he resisted at first, but she took *him* first, and then it felt good enough he couldn't muster the strength to push her away... and even then Rea should still give him the ice-cold shoulder for a while. It'd work a hell of a lot better for the overall plot and legitimacy of the story.

Then with her just.... forgiving him like it's no big deal? If seems like a lot more can be done with that interaction that just wasn't done. If anything, her being mad at him could have been shifted around to something like, "I'm mad because you were busy having sex on your own with her without me, while we were worried sick about you! Next time include me too!" - It'd work better transitioning into the threesome, and kind of feels like it'd suit Rea's personality better since she's apparently quite open to sex with people.

And on that note, with them taking on the alien girl.... They just took her in like a stray kitten and played it off as such. What's the deal with that? It just feels really... underwhelming. I don't know, maybe I'm just expecting way more than the author intended this to be, and i'm just over-analyzing this.

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Why draw alien babes if the females (and only the females) all look exactly like humans in v simple costume, down to having even internal organs in the exact same place?
Why have a plot if it effects character interaction not at all?
Why have recurring characters if they're just cardboard cutouts that get mushed together occasionally?
How does main stupid asshole know that the gray girl didn't already have a name? He didn't even try to communicate with her beyond "can I fuck you without you trying to kill me?" He straight-up treated her like a fucktoy and everyone is totally fine with it.
Also, the art and page layouts are seriously not great.

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New page has alien Duke Nukem, all arguments are meaningless now. Hail to the mother-fucking King, baby!

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...It's just occurred to me that we're never going to see Tia outside of her suit, are we? Except I guess for the cover, kinda.

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And.now Alien Duke Nukem enters the fray.

If we needed any more evidence that women in this comic are objectified cardboard cutouts with no intended personality beyond Fucktoy A, Fucktoy B, and Fucktoy C, here it is.

Only way this could get dumber is if we get a plot twist, and it turns out this "Monty Cage" (most cringeworthy "alien" name ever, BTW) turns out to be from a race where all the females just look incredibly masculine, and proceeds to bang our "hero". Granted, that would at least make the plot less predictable.

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my views are becoming tainted by the comments, but all ill say on the latest page is thus: don't mess this up man, its good so far, but beware you hit that threshold

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Hm. What class should Jack take? Sniper? He loves shooting at aliens.
Rea could make him take tank for the stamina benefits.
Maybe something more rogueish, since he has an ever growing harem to juggle?

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>p.106: unofficial training
Wait, is this even legal?

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This story getting more interesting than i thought so...

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太棒了的说

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This shit's becoming too video games for me.

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@Murderbot I agree. I don't like the characters picking "Classes". Keep it as rules free as possible. I'd have liked this arc a lot more if it was something like "Survival" training instead of levelling up RPG style.

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Is this now a trailer for an upcoming MMORPG or something?

If it is, beta invite plox.

Otherwise this is weird.

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He's going to fuck that robot isn't he?

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@Bonertowns: that what I am hoping for *g

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Did we seriously pass almost all six days in the span of one page? I know Jack is trash, but holy shit.

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Just guessing, but he's going to be dead almost as soon as the rest of the group gets through the portal.

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@ sparhawkian: welp, I actually agree with you on this. In fact, I say we should hold a poll on whether alien duke nukem dies or not next few pages, sounds good?

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So, my prediction is Jack gets absolutely thrashed and Rea has to nurse him back to health. But wheres Eila? She got promoted from nameless alien, so she's gotta be a member of the crew now right?

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lol this writing

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Wait, where Jacks greaves?

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You know, this whole thing becomes infinitely more amusing when I put all of the dialogue into Microsoft text-to-speech voices. Y'all should try it.

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I really hope you continue this or make a new one it's sooooooooo fucking amazing !!!!!

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- So, my prediction is Jack gets absolutely thrashed and Rea has to nurse him back to health (c) Jarvis_42

Yep.

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Does the bodysuit tag still apply if she doesn't actually get fucked while wearing it?

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102-103

Aw, I wanted to see the threesome.

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Well this whole VR training thing was pointless. After all the buildup I'm surprised how quickly it ended.

I wonder if EBlueberry even reads these comments.

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How did that laser even hit anything at all without them noticing? It would have spread so much at that point that it would have done little more than a slight temperature increase at best.

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I'm sorry, but was that boob "boing" on 123 REALLY necessary? I mean really. Why include that.

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Laser shot reminds one of a scene from Mass Effect 2:

Gunnery Chief: This, recruits, is a 20-kilo ferrous slug. Feel the weight. Every five seconds, the main gun of an Everest-class dreadnought accelerates one to 1.3 percent of light speed. It impacts with the force of a 38-kiloton bomb. That is three times the yield of the city buster dropped on Hiroshima back on Earth. That means Sir Isaac Newton is the deadliest son-of-a-bitch in space. Now! Serviceman Burnside! What is Newton's First Law?

First Recruit: Sir! A object in motion stays in motion, sir!

Gunnery Chief: No credit for partial answers, maggot!

First Recruit: Sir! Unless acted on by an outside force, sir!

Gunnery Chief: Damn straight! I dare to assume you ignorant jackasses know that space is empty. Once you fire this husk of metal, it keeps going till it hits something. That can be a ship, or the planet behind that ship. It might go off into deep space and hit somebody else in ten thousand years. If you pull the trigger on this, you're ruining someone's day, somewhere and sometime. That is why you check your damn targets! That is why you wait for the computer to give you a damn firing solution! That is why, Serviceman Chung, we do not "eyeball it!" This is a weapon of mass destruction. You are not a cowboy shooting from the hip!

Second Recruit: Sir, yes sir!

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Sooo, an alien race that enjoys watching TV and go nuts when their TV is cut off...

...Futurama, anyone?

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Ah, and I see we have arrived at the newest sexual conquest for our... protagonist? I think? And these people are aliens, but are a... "Demon" kingdom?

........Fuck it, purple boobs.

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ero oh ero, adventure time on 128

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Yes, an update, thank you so much.

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So your favorite show just got 404'd by an stray laser blast and your first response is to behead whomever's responsible for destroying your satellite.

Cue the (nearly) topless demon queen raping the guy out of revenge the instant after the MC says it was an accident and he has two girlfriends and looking for an third.

Please include an tailjob...

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谁能发个中文版的

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Odds that one of the first few words to come out of Eila's "mouth" is mate?

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Can I reiterate how weird it is that these girls still need to wear their enviro-suits on what is supposed to be their "home planet"?

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So what was the point of the bathhouse? Would have preferred spending more pages introducing Missy who seems to be important. Might also have left room for more explanation of Eila's collar, as opposed to the awkward dump at the end.

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I swear, if they have Eila say "squirrel"...

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How much are you guys willing to bet Eila will say sex a LOT

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Duke Nukem references FTW!

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This might be a small dealt that page 134 you need put at least collar Eila. I know it minor but this kinda normal slip up that happen with artists .

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At this point im more interested in the story that in the "rest" of the content.

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Whatever became of that catgirl?

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Some one needs to update this there are more pages

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lets get some more sex in there

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can someone pls update this ??

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