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Base +36, Lin Setsu A +24, 緋色影法師 +6, kattchaner +6, Reia Elinos +23, Seelenmord +10, Miriah +7

The drawing is OK but the story is as shitty and nonsensical as traditionally is the case in such a style. At least just let them fight a bit and be defeated, that is much better than such a nonsensical surrender. Would anybody feel any pleasure out of such nonsense? Really, just work on the story a little bit more so that people can read a bit into it and feel more immersed. Is it that hard after all? Quite a pity indeed.

Base +5, MercuryLamp -9, ssringo -7, amuass -7, joseph_864 -6, Lus De Blois -7, Shinxix -8, LoveYourself -7, rehinla -5, Miriah -7

Why does Rin get the freakiest shit and not Sakura?

Base +6, Shinxix +8, LoveYourself -7

Because Sakura gets the freaky shit in the actual game.

Base +6, MercuryLamp +9, Devildie +13, notthisagain +6, Noruhma +5, Argret +10, Danieke +3, Shinxix +8, LoveYourself +7, avikdas99 +4, echykr +7, TheQuebecNinja +4, Zakuzelo +14

good! , we need more works like this (y)

Base +2, Zakuzelo +14