If this is supposed to be a Jay Naylor parody, at least it's being somewhat more subtle about it. lol

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Jay Naylor tracing over 9000

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Hahahha I had no idea this was supposed to be a Jay Naylor parody. I was enjoying the tale, rather screwed up stuff. BUT then I learned it's a parody? xD Okay I see it now, very, very funny!

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Parody? Could be honest fanfic and the maker getting cold feet for all we know.

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I would like an artist check. It's pretty Jay Naylor, but could just be a style imitation. There's a lot of that around.

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I don't think it's a parody if you're being the exact same thing you're parodying.

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original commissioner here:
It was not done to please you, RobDollar.
Artist did NOT traced it, SSSdriver. Keep a check on what exactly "tracing it".
Infact it is style influence, as Aatar pointed.
Fanfic imply use of not-owned characters, Wolvien. This is not the case.

Comic was meant for personal use/fun (and few friends): similarities with Naylor's style for arts are unrelated with content.
Me and artist enjoyed some of these contents before Naylor made them famous (with wars fought about them, while ALL the ones fighting them were busy fapping on them).

To be fairly honest it was intended also to include some more direct parody of Naylor's character (implicit reference), but they got scrapped due time-cost.
It would have been just an hint-fun elements for other fans. Not planned for close future, but some kind of spin-off follow-up pictures could be added, and they could include some more explicit light parody/hints/joke/tribute/whateveryoucallit/ of Naylor's characters.

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I didn't think that pointing out EXACTLY what something is supposed to be could be offensive, but... ok...

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