Translation from https://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/10667
Edited by me

The first part of RAINMAKER by Ameyama Telegraph.
First volume: https://e-hentai.org/g/1003541/dab6dd050a/

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/500126/cbf72697bd/
http://www.doujinshi.org/book/359177/RAINMAKER-%281%29-Nametokoyama-no-Kuma/

Thanks for the edit, it's easier to read here than on danbooru.
I look forward to the next chapters.

Base +7, ranoya +6

I got so lost. It feels like it is trying to do a lot. It will go in depth in one thing and then move on. Maybe it will come together later. Normally I would like something trying to weave a lush lore, but this jumps into so much without explaining much very well. And then exposition dumps kinda go on and get confusing. Above all else though...is there a reason Reimu seemed to be on the deeper end of the autism scale? Honestly, I want to see where this goes though.

Base +8, SpacePepper +5, Lotrei +6, Fofotron +6

The Danbooru link is incorrect,this is the actual link.
http://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/10667

Base +14, ranoya +6

Pretty cringe man. So very cringe

Base +8, SpacePepper -5, loliloliloliloliloli -7, pettik0 -6, Drpepperfan -6, kingra3 -5, Fofotron -6, FishnChips -10, ˢᵐᵃˡˡ -8, DeltaD36 -6, Wolfgang Spahn +5, Elgatto12345 -6, C.Murphy -6

Thank you for your efforts, but I feel your choice to omit Reimu's prayer was a bad move (I realize this was due to no translation being available but still). Also I hope you do take in mind what Stan Miller (the original translator for this on danbooru) said upon completing his translations of Rainmaker Vol 1-4:

Stan Miller said:
"Hardest thing I've ever translated. Full of phrases and words and reference I've never seen before. Expect there will be a lot of translations need to be fix in this one."

This having been said perhaps its better to wait a while and let his translation be checked, edited and improved. I say this because this was quite a great series and honestly perhaps its better for a Scanlation team to take this series on and do it proper justice.

That aside, Kudos on your initiative and I will be downloading your edit. :)

Base +8, ranoya +6, Lotrei +6, kingra3 +5, reverse99 +6, penthus +6