Yeah ! Finally, it took me some time and motivation, but here it is !
I think we did a good job, but if you see any typo I missed, feel free to tell me ^^

So what's next ?
1) I'll work on a Log Horizon dj for Red
2) Nurse de Oshigoto is translated, and just need a proofreader before I start editing it
3) Tropical Rainy and Bind Princess have bounties (https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13560 and https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=13559). I think it's the 2 last Shuragyoku's doujins to translate (tell me if I'm wrong)

It's been more than a year now since I started to work on Shuryagoku Mami's doujins, I hope you enjoyed this year as much as me, it was a pleasure to work on all this and I have to admit I'm a bit sad thinking it's almost the end.

Anyway, see you soon !

Edit : fixed the typos, thanks !
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If you want to support this artist, please consider buying her works so that she can continue publishing them :
【http://s-pupupu.tumblr.com/】
【http://www.toranoana.jp/mailorder/cot/circle/09/26/5730313632363039/bfb7c1afb6cbb3da_01.html】
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If you want to see all translated Tales of the Abyss doujins from this author, you can find them here :
09/2007 - Seifuku Mania-san Niyoru Onnanoko no Tame no Hoken Taiiku Kyouiku -> https://e-hentai.org/g/783512/77a94f10fb/
05/2009 - NO-JN-NO-LIFE -> https://e-hentai.org/g/771685/e86a3a0dd4/
05/2009 - Imitation Re:Play -> https://e-hentai.org/g/1085049/d8aa5a5863/
12/2009 - SWEET CANDY MACHINE -> https://e-hentai.org/g/837670/7b13b685c8/
02/2010 - Strawberry Honey -> https://e-hentai.org/g/790864/4d553c28f8/
08/2010 - BIRITAI -> https://e-hentai.org/g/894307/f9e09bcb66/
12/2010 - NO-JN-NO-LIFE Datte Sukidakara! -> https://e-hentai.org/g/766097/6d72de52d0/
12/2010 - Nurse de Oshigoto -> https://e-hentai.org/g/916763/d2eae81bab/
08/2011 - Tropical Rainy -> https://e-hentai.org/g/1158670/64b62a635a/
12/2011 - Love mix Love Letter -> https://e-hentai.org/g/810509/bcdc1d2f2e/
08/2012 - Resort Butterfly -> https://e-hentai.org/g/804782/ee9ab8c750/
12/2012 - Miracle Flavors -> https://e-hentai.org/g/768494/7aab386b45/
08/2013 - Hime-sama, Obenkyou no Ojikan desu -> https://e-hentai.org/g/864452/f95d575889/
12/2013 - Oose no Mama ni -> https://e-hentai.org/g/771271/48e4c9c4b0/
08/2014 - PRETTY BOX -> https://e-hentai.org/g/789460/0894723364/
12/2014 - Bind Princess -> https://e-hentai.org/g/926854/b187e10293/
08/2015 - Kirakira Girl -> https://e-hentai.org/g/1122438/81d68bc488/
12/2015 - Watashi no Kawaii Usagi-san -> https://e-hentai.org/g/992368/5ebb937f06/
08/2016 - Temptation Princess -> https://e-hentai.org/g/1075224/faea341894/
08/2017 - I'll help myself -> https://e-hentai.org/g/1227051/b0463960d6/

Thank you so much!

Hmm, this is one I don't believe you have done:

Imitation Re:Play

https://e-hentai.org/g/174793/cf8ffa049b/

It was my first exposure to this artist too!

Base +6, Red of EHCOVE +52

Tights-ripping truly is a miracle of the universe.

PS.
p.5&6, "shoping" -> "shopping"
p.10, "you looks" -> "you look"
13 & 14 are dupes, the latter being much higher quality and twice the file size.
p.15 & 18 "did you came" -> "did you come"/"did you cum"
p.19 "stiring" -> "stirring" (If the intent was to suggest slurred speech by deliberate misspelling, you're better off deleting the end g, inserting h's and/or duplicating other consonants (shtirring, stirrinn), than deleting one of a consonant pair)
p. 26 "do you know how many times have you cum?" -> "do you know how many times you've cum?" or "How many times have you cum? Do you know?"
p. 27 "hiting" -> "hitting" (see p.19)
p. 35 "did I seems" -> "did I seem"
p. 36 I know the Japanese have a huge thing about using personal names, but as far as English is concerned, addressing a person by a rank/professional title (Colonel) while naked in bed together, right after fucking like rabbits all afternoon, sounds rather bizarre.
p. 39 "I got stucked!" I must confess, I haven't a clue what this is supposed to mean. Evidently something that resulted in tearing her hose?
p. 40 "luckly" -> "luckily"
p. 46 "only my" -> "only mine"

Last edited on 14 January 2016, 02:09.

Base +8, Red of EHCOVE +52

I think you did a poor translation in this one. Most of the Shuragyoku tales' you translated were fantastic. This one have a lot of mistakes.
I hope you can do an update because I really like your work.

edit: thanks you!

Last edited on 14 January 2016, 15:07.

Base +8, Lostalgia +5, jfragrettel +7

@lotornomiko : thanks, I'll add it to my to-do list.

@Arkper : thanks, I fixed it, except for the "colonel" p 36 (I know it sounds weird but it's really what she says here) and for the "I got stuck", check the page and you'll see she got stuck on a branch.

@waltergeist : Don't worry, I updated it. The translator had some difficulties with english so I had to fix the script, but as a non-native english speaker I'm not necessarly efficient... Sorry ^^"
And about a proofreading... For Hime-sama, Obenkyou no Ojikan desu, when I posted the script in order to have it proofread, someone stole the script and sent it to another editor, maybe to have it released earlier as I didn't have a lot of time to edit at that time... So I'm a bit hesitant now.

Last edited on 14 January 2016, 19:31.

Base +14, jfragrettel +7, Red of EHCOVE +52

网络上唯一一个能下的版本。。

Base +6