Translation corrections by: N04h
Editing by: me
Scanned by: TZERNA AIRLINES
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/889899/44977f4386/

What I did was take XxMonarchxX's translation, fixed up the grammar, editing and typesetting, then had N04h retranslate, fix and proofread what was wrong, mistranslated or missing.

The end result being this fresh translation, enjoy.

You can find N04h here: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=146740

@XxMonarchxX
It can't be taken down anymore. That's why I originally offered to send you to upload it. You would've just replaced your work. Visiting this part of the forum is in your interest:
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showforum=81

I want Poison to destroy my anus.

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Chaos you're a saint.

Gotta love that Poison!

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@chaos-x
thanks man. Some of my stuff was correct, but I see I've got a lot to learn haha. There were some lines of dialogue I did remember having trouble with, but with this, It'll help me for next time. I definitely have your contact for next time. Really appreciate the time you took to revise mine. This translation looks more solid.

Question though. Do I take my translation down or do I let g-e do the work?

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POISONS PIZZA
IS THE PIZZA
FOR YOU AND ME

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Does anyone know who did the artwork for page 4?

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@walaboo

Is it motchie?

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@raiden18

Seems like, thanks man!

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@chaos-x
You're doing God's work, son.

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/889899/44977f4386/
ENG: https://e-hentai.org/g/896404/03c71ace2b/
ENG: https://e-hentai.org/g/898826/3c41f1544f/ (you are here)
ESP: https://e-hentai.org/g/898351/36fc20a9b7/
RUS: https://e-hentai.org/g/960150/18abb428e5/
RUS: https://e-hentai.org/g/1233599/3b083b656a/
BRA: https://e-hentai.org/g/1220451/e61eb5dc65/
CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/1292645/48091dcec5/

Last edited on 29 September 2018, 01:54.

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Two of THE sexiest shemales I'll ever see in fiction!
Always nice to see more doujins with these two!
Extra nice if they're translated!
I know I'm late to the party, but thanks a bunch!

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Hot shemale action. I got hard as hell.
I would love to have poison fuck my ass.

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