Seriously what is with the fking censorship for a "western" doujin , you expect me to support you in a patreon if you are going to give me censored stuff , then i may as well stick with the japanese ones .

EDIT
So i just saw he is holding the uncensored ones for patreons only , gg there artist , gg

Last edited on 06 February 2016, 09:40.

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Cant tell if the low rating is because of the art, the story, or because its a Raikage harem instead of a Naruto one.

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why the cover is real good but the rest of the comic is... not good at all?

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Maybe it's also because there is censorship because it's by a western artist and there is no need for censorship unless this is from Japan.

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This is not from japan, so why censor?

Atleast the censored artists are good.....

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@smarty358
Likely because:

>Hinata doing this for Sasuke's sake
There goes the suspension of disbelief out of the window

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I’m going to give this the honest review while art wise you’d more or less be on the same level as Sunahara Wataru but plot or story wise I’d have to give it a fail. you just basically jumped right into the main act without doing a quick cover as to why this happened. also putting a text box to say he did them all night doesn’t lead to a mind break it’d be more on the lines the girls were worn out and more less brought into something they may not come back from. Mind breaks, NTRs, and Nakadashi scenarios where the girl is raped or forced to do it cause of an obligation against her will take time to build and make happen. these aren’t the kind of things that happen over night. It’s as bad as a badly written American porn. the art is the only positive thing here but a lot of other things give it a low rating. and now that I read this again I just noticed this is basically Naruhodo’s story on how Sakura and Hinata tried to talk the Feudal Lord of Lightning to forgive Sasuke but this doesn’t even have that much thought into it.

I have to give it a low 1.5 out of 5. practice more on writing out a plot then try again

that was what I said to him on Tumblr.

@smarty458 mostly due to the story here if you can even call it that.

while Doujinshi in general tend to make the characters somewhat OOC there's still a reason or some small plot as to why you know. this guy doesn't even stick anywhere close to the characters in how they are and relies on complete stereotypes on black doods having big dicks. Japan does this too but they put more on the concept of mind games, sex techniques, aphrodisiacs, and other things to wear the woman down after a couple of nights have passed. this guy basically believes all the NTR mind breaking stuff happens over night when that is never the case. there's a certain kind of development that has to happen before the ending he put in there even happens. This aims at the lowest common reader level and it doesn't even do that well. too much OOC, no real plot as to why this is happening, and using racial stereotypes make this one of the worst western made Naruto hentai comics I've seen in awhile. a lot of the other works that are similar to this art style by a guy named Hime something or other who did the Killer Bee x Hinata one is just as bad as with the same issues. here.

I don't want to discourage the guy but unless someone tells him outright the problems with this he's never gonna find where he needs improvement at. first off regardless if it's his fetish he needs to think outside the box of racial stereotypes and over exaggerated big dicks since that is primarily for those who have shown they can think outside the box and the other problem he has is that he has no sense of plot or story development here, and since he's basing this on Naruto characters he needs to work on learning about the characters themselves to better apply these scenarios.

If you want to support this artist that's fine but don't lie to the man's face and tell it's perfect or good. you want him to be better then you need to lay down the good and the bad and what he needs to improve on.

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@Fu-reiji im fully desaggre, this guy art not same level as Sunahara Wataru not even close.

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@HKE Hey just a friend heads up, bbw was updated on Feb 02, so double check to make sure the gallery fits the new tag definition.

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