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could someone explain the last page?

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I think the notebook is a list of all the Fate girls he intends to "break". Glasses = Rider has been marked complete.
Now I'm just guessing here; Red = Tohsaka, Blue = Saber, Bug = Sakura, Loli = Illya, Suit = Bazett, Tiger = Taiga.
I have no idea who number 14 or White 1 & White 2 are. Minoyan is mentioned at the bottom of the page, in case you didn't notice.

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@Topska

Maybe White 1 & 2 are Leysritt and Sella?

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Page 40. Lol he's so sexy

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This was actually really well written, and quite sad.

Need more NTR stories like this. I hope the author does an aftermath of this or Sakura next.

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@ Ficfactor
Aah, right. I totally forgot about those two. Yeah, that makes sense.
Now there's just 14.. The only Fate girl that hasn't been mentioned that I can think of is Caren, but I don't know what she has to do with the number 14.
Then there's all the Tohsaka's friends, like Kaede and Kane. Plus that drill hair Luvia.

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I read red and blue and I thought he did Archer and Lancer .___.

Now the series is finally over.

OK from that last page we get his list:

Red = Rin
Blue = Saber
Bug = Sakura
Loli = Illya
Suit = Bazett
Tiger = Taiga
White 1&2 = Illya's maids

The only one left would be 14, unless there is a meaning behind Jyushi I can't see how it's related to Caren.

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I miss the time when this author did happy stories about rider ;_;

@Wilfriback like we could possibly have enough loveydovey Rider, I crave more vanilla Rider.

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@Capi duffman
What are you talking about?
All of his works after this one from 85 have been vanilla Rider doujins.

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Pretty sure 14 is Caren, as Caren is 14 years old I believe.

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Weird thing is I don't care about girls like tamed Rider and Sakura when she isn't corrupted. They're like Superman, a Mary Sue type character that is the most boring unless either they die or turn evil, so when NTR or something bad happens to them they are right where they belong. The artist that puts them in terrible situations is doing these bland characters a favor, and by some strange irony making these bland characters more interesting by breaking these seemingly perfect girl-next-door/hot and timid archetypes and not putting them back together when they are done.

Also the sex scenes were great, good breaking down story.

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I could mention 100 ways this plot doesn't make sense and contradicts established things.

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Is this the end of the series?

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why draw such a lovely male face on the cover if you're not going to do it in the doujinshi? all face shots of rider and none of our NTR-rape protagonist.

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Hot as hell! Thanks for the share and translation, great work!

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@HikariNiwa
Caren is 17.

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Didn't the blast one show a page where he was having sex with one of the humonculi?

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@RaizelX
Link perhaps?

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@ xaaaci2 I forgot about this for a while https://e-hentai.org/s/5f85710184/903871-32 lower left hand panel or am I reading too much into it?

Either way here's to hoping for an eventual sequel

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Was hoping they would do ome woth the rest of the girls oh wwll

Dissapointed they never did more with this

Last edited on 16 November 2017, 07:49.

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Part1:
<a href="https://e-hentai.org/g/875215/823e67b601/">https://e-hentai.org/g/875215/823e67b601/</a>;
<br>Part2:
<a href="https://e-hentai.org/g/876686/d0c943bd24/">https://e-hentai.org/g/876686/d0c943bd24/</a>;
<br>Part3: this one
<br>Part4:
<a href="https://e-hentai.org/g/885372/ac2acd51c2/">https://e-hentai.org/g/885372/ac2acd51c2/</a>; (incomplete: gamer325 is working on it)
<br>Part5:
<a href="https://e-hentai.org/g/677583/ccc261ccca/">https://e-hentai.org/g/677583/ccc261ccca/</a>; (raw: Trinity Translations Team is working on it)

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I love how the author built up Rider and Shiro's relationship through his own works and then ended then wrapped it all up with an NTR multi-works series. Have you noticed he hasn't made any new Rider/Shiro doujins since? That's...I don't know what to think lmao

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"Dilf" Oh yeah I'm sure a lot of people would want to hit that

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Well, the fat ugly fuck does love her so maybe he is the other option compare to that cheater Shirou.

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