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Base +64, Saloz +6, Moe Zayik +21, dukenukem3d +6, Yairz +7, homogenized +8, Paizurikin +10, selago +7

Sigh...I have a sinking feeling this is a rewrite/machine translated/non-native English based on the user's rather short history. I see someone even started the tag.

Note: I don't know nor read Japanese, so looking at the English version isn't going to be enough to completely condemn it...though it just feels off.

@freudia Thanks for confirming it. *plays: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ytCEuuW2_A

Base +20, fidazzle +8, Shylight +6, newp123 +6, Yairz +7, Zemyih +6

Took a quick look at the first page. It most certainly is a rewrite.

Base +31, badgerkins +7, Shylight +6, CustomX +18, kobatochandaisuki +7, Yairz +7, BFBK +6, Visadio +15, magico alverman +14

i'm not sure since i haven't seen the original but this translation isn't as bad as you guys are making it seem. sure there are some parts that seem a little off like on page 18 " im cumming all over your rapid cock" but for the most part it seems acceptable.

anyways, that is one lucky dude having a neighbor down to fug like that. brb going to go slam my donger.

Base +16, shinigami-sisho -7, Jow3000 -6, japaleno33 +3, Sol Goodguy +6, Bugalugs -6, kobatochandaisuki -7, waltergeist -8, Yairz -7, Rouge･ -30, homogenized -8, deadlink -7, SapphireJack +7

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEwrite
REMOVE

Base +7, kaasy +6, CarmeloAnthony +6, Shylight +6, stopwatch +6, Bugalugs +6, kobatochandaisuki +7, dukenukem3d +6, waltergeist +8, Darksword696 +8, Yairz +7, pencilfight +6, BFBK +6, and 8 more...

8/10
0.5 star rated
-2 for not even a funny rewrite
please never upload again
( ¬‿¬)

Base +10, waltergeist +8, Yairz +7, pencilfight +6, Bugalugs +6, Paizurikin +10, Sadomi +6

The last page. I wouldn't be surprised if he mistakes her as his girlfriend from now on.

Base +3, waltergeist -8, Yairz -7, homogenized -8, CarmeloAnthony -6, deadlink -7, Rouga_Zanma -7, edson -10

Wow how many years since I've seen a rewrite upload.

Base +7, Yairz -7

thanks for uploading id rather have a rewrite than nothing at all.

Base +7, ninjadragon -12, Denjiro -11, Thulia51 +3, Bugalugs -6, billytherapist -1, Rouga_Zanma -7, Paizurikin -10, edson -10, IntarwebzFTW -6

this could count as a Reverse or Female Netorare? xD .. i was wondering to see a woman with bigger gifts than another taking his man and then this appears . could be a new thing

Base +6, Rouga_Zanma -7

Actually, this is the best non-humor rewrite I've seen. That really means all other rewrites were garbage more than anything- but it's actually 'ok'.
Still would rather have a proper translation of course...

Base +9, BustahWoluf +16