Thanks for the release!
Typo p37, panel 2, bubble 2: Let's NOT...
Otherwise, great doujin, Maya-sama is super cool and Choukai is cute as always.

Base +6, malikski +6

also pg 02, "I don't know if was because" should be "if it was"
pg 12, "cearly" should be "clearly"
pg 15, "wierd" should be "weird" (is misspelled twice)
pg 17 "Looks like normal movement no issues either" should be "movements have no issues either"
pg 23 "start moving" should be "started moving"
pg 33 "bodeis" should be "bodies". and "You played as me played" should be a comma, "you played as me, played"
pg 36 "I told you, you won't understand" should be "wouldn't". and "But your so sly" should be "you are so sly"
pg 44, "Because if was I wasn't there" should be "Because if I wasn't there" (has "was" twice).
"It was a patch up this missing thing?" (I have no idea about this sentence).

these are the errors I noticed.

Last edited on 15 July 2016, 10:37.

Base +6

Good lord that is A LOT. But thanks @mutopis for spotting out the errors would edit asap

Base +4

pg 17 "Looks like normal movement no issues either" I misspoke, should be "have" not "has".
pg 23, "My limbs move on their own like long before move all on their own" I am not sure what to make of this sentence.
pg 34, "What are you planning to do" should be "were you planning"

Base +6

Anotha one
thankies!

Base +4

I re-read it, I think I got them all. Maybe someone should re-check on it to make sure on the QC.

Base +6

You can't fool big sisters Takao and Atago.

Base +7, Onthorm +7, jfragrettel +7, W G +6, finnick8 +7, malikski +6, xDalb +8

pg 42, "If it were really Maya" should be "was" not were. Some of the sentences are a bit weird but seems passable. I suggest to get help from 4chan /a/ in the Kancolle thread or from Yuriproject board for QC. If you can.

Base +6, fjdkslaa -6

Thanks, ucoffeew, good work as always

Base +6