First time trying to translate and edit manga. I actually just know a bit of Japanese and Spanish. Saw this manga was uploaded in those languages and tried to translate it based off that. The two versions translated differently, but since the Japanese version mostly just had moaning sounds I leaned more on the Spanish translation. I hope this finds you all well. Open to comments and criticism :)

Raw https://e-hentai.org/s/61aa963f6f/851875-2

Base +64, Greelox +7, Lostalgia +6, Paizurikin +10, Craw +6

Its a great translate. Just seeing this artist's work makes me cum buckets.

Base +6, drei +7, fjdksla -7, Craw +6, ninjadragon -12, kingejn +6, Denjiro -12, CriscoGawd -7, Seelenmord -10, smarty358 +6

THANK YOU DREI SENPAI

Base +5, drei +7, mattiafr88 +6, Seelenmord -10, smarty358 -6

> Dura-cell

I...uh,...yeah....

Base +7, Gvertin +7, Dawnell_do +1, Craw +6, FrozenPyro +6, panzercrust +6, D. Hart +7, SerahClaw +3, imonlyhere4porn +4, Shad0wsun +6, KrystalKross23 +5, Raging +7, Dragonotakux +7, and 4 more...

Of all the haircuts Bulma had, this was by far the worst.

Base +6, Craw +6, D. Hart +7, Dawnell_do -1, ssj4jw -7, Raging +7, eleeinos -24, smarty358 +6, dietrich ferrari +6, 001Bulbasaur +6

Did she call Trunks "Mini- Vegeta"?

Base +5, LukaBoom +6, Craw +6, SerahClaw +3, KrystalKross23 +5, Goretanton +5

hahaha great

Base +1, Seelenmord -10, smarty358 +6

So you translated a rewrite. Fail.

Proper TL https://e-hentai.org/g/1021724/8c7420599c/

Base +53, drei -7