A dolcett-inspired story about the final days of two twin sisters. Contains violence, snuff and canibalism.

revcuck
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The scenes and some of the props look good and the presence of shadows indicate that either the scene came with preloaded lights or the artist worked to create realistic lighting. In stark contrast the characters skin textures are bland. None of the shots seem to use lighting inside the room so as a result you get some strange dark patches in places where you don't want them. Additionally, in pic 44, when you want to see the girl's face its lost in shadow. I would suggest installing a mesh light into the interior of the scene to soften the stark shadowing. (I'm assuming this was made in Poser or DazStudio)

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Thanks for your comments. While I'm still a beginner and have a lot to learn, my biggest issue here is my old computer, which prevents me from using the best renderer and forces me to disable some options :(

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The visuals look fine to me. Better than most 3d work. But for a dolcett story this is kinda Meh. Dolcett may be extreme, but it works because it has a special kind of romance to it. The finality of it, the impending doom, the acceptance of fate, are just some of the elements that give Dolcett stories their unique appeal. Other stories just don't have that kind of thing. Dolcett makes cannibalism sexy and romantic. This story spends far too much time on sex with dad, or beating and raping the second girl. The snuff, spitting and cooking elements are extremely brief when they should be the heart of the story. I hope that helps.

Base +2, alicediamond +6

Hi. Thanks for your comments. I hope you will enjoy the final part of the story better, then, because it spends more time on the snuff, spitting and cooking. The idea here (but maybe it was a mistake) was not to tell the same story for both girls, and keep the most visual stuff for the second one.

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waiting for cooking alive

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Wow actually remembered you can't cook someone and have the hair stay fine, the hair is going to burn off fairly early in the process if you don't shave it off first.

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