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"Started going to University Club".

Where all the kids meet to play university, obviously.

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looks like an interesing story, if the editing could be better...

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There's absolutely no excuse to use paint while we have The Gimp for free and can rival Photoshop in some aspects.

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How is this rated even above 3 stars...? I mean, I saw the cover and I noped super hard immediately.

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That paint tier editing.

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More please. Thanks!

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really wish someone would upload this guy's most recent "ore no yome ga netoratereiru"

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This work could really use some proofreading. Here's a cleaned-up version of the text in boxes.

Page 1
For any mother and son...
a "welcome home" kiss is part of a good parent-child relationship.
That's what I thought at the time.

Page 2
But now, "welcome home" kisses with my son have turned into this.
My son changed after he started attending university.
I wonder... if he's started becoming interested in sex.

Page 3
My son offered to give me a massage. He started touching my body, but the part he's touching is not something you'd normally massage.
Not only that, but he's rubbing his erection on it...

Page 4
He gradually became even bolder, and started fondling my breasts.
Oh, no! How far does he intend to go...?

That's 10 grammatical errors on the first 4 pages alone, well within the "poor grammar" tag requirement of 10 errors per 40 pages.

@bakalicious

Proofreading is not necessarily an easy task. You should see the translated scripts I've had to work with in the past -- some of them are even worse than what you see in the example above.

Last edited on 09 August 2016, 07:05.

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Thank you for translating it. Favorited.
Editing or proof-reading is the easy part, getting an authentic translated script is the hard part.

In fact, instead of people complaining for the free translation, why not offer to help them with proof-reading?

@meow_pao
"easy" is the wrong way to say it, I apologize. What I meant was "straightforward". The translation step is more valuable than proof-reading, once it's out there other people can fix it.

Last edited on 10 August 2016, 06:34.

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This "free translation" bullshit is still alive and well, I see.

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Lots of untranslated stuff. No need to trasnlate proper nouns and honorifics.

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More translations of other comics in English required

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only for today XDDD

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Love that Poor Grammar is a tag.

(That's my fetish.)

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I get off to "poor grammar" tagged hentai

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Alternative Translation: https://e-hentai.org/s/b8878f1298/1099859-57

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