http://www.doujinshi.org/book/800978/CXIA/
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=50001943
http://www.toranoana.jp/bl/article/04/0030/29/85/040030298545.html
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This is a god-awful translation.

Base +6, God Revan -4, Jwake -2, Brerose +6

When a doujin makes you go full WTF to the point that you can't fap OR enjoy the story...I gotta say, that's a bad doujin.

Base +7, Prof. Tree +5, MoonShine +7, Black-lights +5, TheSeaDragoon -1

Actually really dark considering the events of Lightning Returns, but this doujin doesn't make a lot of sense if you don't know the plot of that game. Really like the use of coloring here to show Hope's eroding sanity.

Base +6, Jwake +2, Dust of Silver +6, ki1ler7 +18, Xhominid +5, 232321 +8

It's not totally wrong, but there are definately multiple blatant errors with this translation. I can see why johj333 would feel that way.

Since this was translated from Spanish, I don't know if I can really blame the SP->EN translator. Looking at the JP->SP translation, based on what little Spanish I can surmise, the Spanish translation is faulty just like this, and thus the errors carried over to the English translation.

Base +13