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[Mamezou] Zubora na Ane | Sloppy sister (ANAX) [English] {bfrost} [Digital]

[まめぞう] ズボラな姉 (あなっくす) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2016-10-28 15:34
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Language:English  TR
File Size:7.23 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:2261 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.54

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Posted on 28 October 2016, 15:34 by:   bfrost    PM
Uploader Comment
Translated and edited by me.
Thanks to pundeiu for a few lines.
It was a tough one, both editing and translating wise, so it might be off sometimes.

Raw:
https://e-hentai.org/s/9439c0700e/795240-84
Posted on 28 October 2016, 17:39 by:   Harakudoshi    PM
Score +187
Big sister vanilla anal. MY ONLY WEAKNESS
Posted on 28 October 2016, 17:53 by:   Abweichung    PM
Score +345
THE BUTT CONNOISSEUR STRIKES
Posted on 28 October 2016, 18:15 by:   Hakrei    PM
Score +61
I would only suggest changing the font for the text boxes, but overall it was pretty well done...
Thanks for sharing!
Posted on 28 October 2016, 19:11 by:   nn44    PM
Score +28
Wow, now that's what I call quality! Nice
Posted on 28 October 2016, 19:21 by:   magictoaster    PM
Score +40
I like anal as much as the next guy, but I'm kind of disappointed that they didn't go all the way.
Posted on 28 October 2016, 20:05 by:   bfrost    PM
Score +36
@Hakrei
Which font are you talking about? Like for the first bubble: "This is abrupt but..."?

@Drous
Thanks. Well, no need to update I guess. But thanks anyway.
Posted on 28 October 2016, 20:10 by:   Drous    PM
Score +24
Thanks for the translation

There are 3 lines that sound a little weird

Page 6 : Could she be the type that feels it from the ass?
Should i ... stick a finger in?

Page 7 : How could a girl not wake up while her butt is getting massaged?
Posted on 29 October 2016, 00:22 by:   Noreally    PM
Score +81
>Bam? Here is young tight meat, not caring about what I assert.

This is almost poetry. Also, ASSert. Heh.
Posted on 29 October 2016, 01:07 by:   mysteriousstranger3    PM
Score +122
I'm not one to look a gift horse in the mouth, but perhaps getting a proofreader would help out your translations? I believe the font Hakrei was talking about is the font that you used to signify that the younger brother was narrating. I'll also give you some examples of text that seems a bit off in english. On the third page the line "Since she's like this, that's always I who clean her room."

It would sound better like "Since she's like this, it's always me who has to clean her room" or for the second part of the line "it's always me who cleans her room."

And the next page "It drives me a bit angry" would sound better if it was "It drives me a bit crazy" or "it makes me a bit angry"

Same page "So, which trick could I play to her?" would sound better as "So, which trick could I play on her?" or "So, which trick should I play on her?"

Same page "Has she gain weight?" Would be better as "Has she gained weight?" Etc Etc. I don't want to fill this whole section with proof reads, but I could always send you a private message later if you'd like some suggestions to improve your script.
Posted on 29 October 2016, 02:05 by:   Sled_Storm    PM
Score -96
Not saying this was bad, but I am once again reminded I will never
understand the appreciation some people have to rimming...
Posted on 31 October 2016, 02:32 by:   karambula    PM
Score +7
Brother thinking while doing the deed, "I love big butts and cannot lie".
Posted on 06 May 2017, 14:24 by:   Hezard    PM
Score -38
Just letting all that pussy go to waste man... shame on you mr.protagonist.
Posted on 25 November 2021, 05:30 by:   lurphysmaw    PM
Score +14
Everything went butter than expected.

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